08-09-2009, 11:20 AM
08-10-2009, 02:56 AM
(04-13-2009, 09:25 AM)just_a_phil Wrote: [ -> ]dunno how it is about you..but i think the small things make the great things look better
so what i have fixed now..
-added some forgotten shading at the area of the left(our right) arm.
-fixed up the left(our right) arm.
-added a mouth with an intense shading colour ^^
for me he is perfect.. i like him in other words.. dunno if i will turn him into an char (would take ages)
but i will at least make a standing for him. so which char should i remake now? (requests are allowed)
WTF! You removed the photo!
08-10-2009, 05:30 AM
i have no idea who darren shan is, but i will comment on the sprite for your sake 
he looks a little...i dunno...plastic. maybe coz his shirt isnt shaded with a slight gradient. his hair is alright, though it doesnt seem to be coming from anywhere, or going anywhere, i mean it doesnt have like source, or a direction, its just a blue thing on his head :P
the belt buck is too square shaped, and looks a bit like it was done in paint.
his pants, the crotch of the pants is too low
hope that helped

he looks a little...i dunno...plastic. maybe coz his shirt isnt shaded with a slight gradient. his hair is alright, though it doesnt seem to be coming from anywhere, or going anywhere, i mean it doesnt have like source, or a direction, its just a blue thing on his head :P
the belt buck is too square shaped, and looks a bit like it was done in paint.
his pants, the crotch of the pants is too low
hope that helped
08-10-2009, 06:27 AM
(08-10-2009, 05:30 AM)Alectric Wrote: [ -> ]his pants, the crotch of the pants is too low

Anyway, bat looks too good to say he's good! HE'S A MASTERPIECE!!!
10-12-2009, 07:15 AM
nice char bro =))
darren is a really good char and nice pants
darren is a really good char and nice pants

10-12-2009, 01:46 PM
thanks dude.. but this thread is very old now.. try to comment more on the newer ones.. allthough i might make some new sprites... how about some requests? i can't promise anything but at least it will help me improving 

10-15-2009, 09:31 PM
what about... SANTA CLAUSE! 

01-06-2010, 05:43 PM
*bump*
![[Image: bandit_new.png]](http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee74/THXPhil/bandit_new.png)
new version of bandit.. he is supposed to look older just as a side note..
but i really need your comments on this... in my eyes he looks strange but i can't see the mistakes..
^^
![[Image: bandit_new.png]](http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee74/THXPhil/bandit_new.png)
new version of bandit.. he is supposed to look older just as a side note..
but i really need your comments on this... in my eyes he looks strange but i can't see the mistakes..
^^
01-06-2010, 05:50 PM
Yeah, he definately looks older. I don't know what's strange for you, I really like it. There are just a few edges, f. e. at his shirt you could round.
Oh and he looks like he has his chest forward + very muscular, I think because it covers his left( his perspective) arm. Maybe that's what looks strange for you?
Nice work btw.
"It" is the chest^^
Oh and he looks like he has his chest forward + very muscular, I think because it covers his left( his perspective) arm. Maybe that's what looks strange for you?
Nice work btw.
01-06-2010, 05:55 PM
(01-06-2010, 05:50 PM)Reaper Wrote: [ -> ]Oh and he looks like he has his chest forward + very muscular, I think because it covers his left( his perspective) arm. Nice work btw.
could you please specify "it". Oh and thanks ^^