05-27-2008, 10:48 AM
05-27-2008, 12:16 PM
not bad but I think he is a bit too thin.
05-27-2008, 02:32 PM
Dragonxl Wrote:not bad but I think he is a bit too thin.
Yea
05-27-2008, 03:08 PM
<review>
5 start points-- (5/10)
hmm, there are some black shadows under the right (if you were him; left) arm. (-1)
The hair looks unclearly..(-1).the body does, too!(-1) The t-shirt light-properties are weird, bad hued,(-1) the color isn't very nice...
(-1)
(5x-1= -5)
so much to the bad points! Now the god ones:
The trouser looks clear,(+1) light properties are right ,(+1) and I like the color!,(+1)
This counts also for the shoes!,(+1) The hairs in front of the face are looking good (reminds meh on Werewolf, a char made by DarkZorro),(+1)
(5x+1= +5)
__________________
result:
5/10-5+5= 5/10
good score for the first char...^^
</review>
5 start points-- (5/10)
hmm, there are some black shadows under the right (if you were him; left) arm. (-1)
The hair looks unclearly..(-1).the body does, too!(-1) The t-shirt light-properties are weird, bad hued,(-1) the color isn't very nice...
(-1)
(5x-1= -5)
so much to the bad points! Now the god ones:
The trouser looks clear,(+1) light properties are right ,(+1) and I like the color!,(+1)
This counts also for the shoes!,(+1) The hairs in front of the face are looking good (reminds meh on Werewolf, a char made by DarkZorro),(+1)
(5x+1= +5)
__________________
result:
5/10-5+5= 5/10
good score for the first char...^^
</review>
05-27-2008, 03:16 PM
Hair is the same as davis hair... It only looks unclear because it is on a white background.
05-27-2008, 09:56 PM
agree with the posters above, he has some weird proportions and the bg-color is a bit irritating. Also, I wouldn't call that a "first char", you know, there are still the complete spritesheets to do and the data... just to be picky :P
elsewise, pretty good for doing it the first time
elsewise, pretty good for doing it the first time
05-28-2008, 12:51 AM
BluePhoenix Wrote:agree with the posters above, he has some weird proportions and the bg-color is a bit irritating. Also, I wouldn't call that a "first char", you know, there are still the complete spritesheets to do and the data... just to be picky :P
elsewise, pretty good for doing it the first time
Ok.I Understand now...