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I watch many people making a char......So i made this....Pls don't Laugh...
Comment plss...:D
not bad but I think he is a bit too thin.
Dragonxl Wrote:not bad but I think he is a bit too thin.

Yea
<review>
5 start points-- (5/10)

hmm, there are some black shadows under the right (if you were him; left) arm. (-1)
The hair looks unclearly..(-1).the body does, too!(-1) The t-shirt light-properties are weird, bad hued,(-1) the color isn't very nice...
(-1)

(5x-1= -5)

so much to the bad points! Now the god ones:

The trouser looks clear,(+1) light properties are right ,(+1) and I like the color!,(+1)
This counts also for the shoes!,(+1) The hairs in front of the face are looking good (reminds meh on Werewolf, a char made by DarkZorro),(+1)

(5x+1= +5)
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result:
5/10-5+5= 5/10

good score for the first char...^^
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Hair is the same as davis hair... It only looks unclear because it is on a white background.
agree with the posters above, he has some weird proportions and the bg-color is a bit irritating. Also, I wouldn't call that a "first char", you know, there are still the complete spritesheets to do and the data... just to be picky :P
elsewise, pretty good for doing it the first time :)
BluePhoenix Wrote:agree with the posters above, he has some weird proportions and the bg-color is a bit irritating. Also, I wouldn't call that a "first char", you know, there are still the complete spritesheets to do and the data... just to be picky :P
elsewise, pretty good for doing it the first time :)

Ok.I Understand now...