11-21-2010, 10:14 AM
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11-21-2010, 10:21 AM
It looks pretty okay but could you do that next time on a clean sheet?
There are many disturbing squiggly lines in the background
There are many disturbing squiggly lines in the background

11-21-2010, 10:33 AM
Hmmm, this rather looks like some kind of Devil-Vegeta then Louis to me ^^
May add some things that clearly show it's Louis... since it's uncolored, hair is not an option, but may you can add some armor parts?
May add some things that clearly show it's Louis... since it's uncolored, hair is not an option, but may you can add some armor parts?
11-21-2010, 11:32 AM
(06-18-2010, 02:36 PM)Blue Phoenix Wrote: [ -> ]the human rarely consists of straight lines.
Thats right my friend.
PS: I don't care if he is a devil. His packs are made with straight lines so is the body. Try to correct it.
11-21-2010, 11:54 AM
(11-21-2010, 11:32 AM)firzenx Wrote: [ -> ](06-18-2010, 02:36 PM)Blue Phoenix Wrote: [ -> ]the human rarely consists of straight lines.
Thats right my friend.
PS: I don't care if he is a devil. His packs are made with straight lines so is the body. Try to correct it.
Ok guys i do it as quickly as possible and next time in clean sheet

11-21-2010, 04:16 PM
I think add some ripped clothes but not to much and evil eyes
11-21-2010, 06:06 PM
Made your guy into an lf2 sprite for training:
![[Image: hw0lyg.png]](http://i56.tinypic.com/hw0lyg.png)
I hope you don't mind
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![[Image: hw0lyg.png]](http://i56.tinypic.com/hw0lyg.png)
I hope you don't mind
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11-22-2010, 07:15 AM
(11-21-2010, 06:06 PM)chase123 Wrote: [ -> ]Made your guy into an lf2 sprite for training:
I hope you don't mind.
Ya its good but mot like that as i think dont mind
11-22-2010, 07:43 AM
11-22-2010, 07:43 AM
For some reason it looks like a Sasuke + Deviljin (whatever his name is) fusion.
You should make him look more 'Louis', add some armour, change the hairstyle etc. since at the moment I couldn't recognise himself.
If you'd like to keep the traits (wings, weapon, pants) make it more original. Even though I don't know a lot about Naruto and Tekken, I could recognise the features (Sasuke's wings-thing, Deviljin's hairstyle and pants etc.)
You should make him look more 'Louis', add some armour, change the hairstyle etc. since at the moment I couldn't recognise himself.
If you'd like to keep the traits (wings, weapon, pants) make it more original. Even though I don't know a lot about Naruto and Tekken, I could recognise the features (Sasuke's wings-thing, Deviljin's hairstyle and pants etc.)
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