Looks nice

colors are fine, well atleats my phone shows it

I think his shoulders are to high or his arms could be bit longer.
Overall you did a great job

(07-19-2013, 09:53 PM)The Hari Wrote: [ -> ]Jason, character from old Marti's game called "Fight".
I'd be grateful for cc.
What the ...
He's the final boss of that game - don't draw him like a regular little fighter.
He needs to be at least as buff as Celsius, Magnus or even Julian.
![[Image: JULIAN234.gif]](http://lf2.co.il/images/JULIAN234.gif)
Again tried to get as close to lf style as I can, but this time in original size.
Also once again take reference from old Marti's works. It's Leo from his flash game.
![[Image: ettfmv.png]](http://i40.tinypic.com/ettfmv.png)
Is it more LF-ish than Jason? ^^
hey its leo

)) I played this game. on a first stage. there was 1 enemy left. I died
Yes.
Could use more colour contrast on the hair and more shape contrast around waist and hands/arms (he's just a blob there while his posture in the game is pretty pronounced).
also, sprite looks very blurry and its hard too see a contrast between some colors because of that
Why finding a good design for LF character is so damn hard?
I want to
(try) make a character, but can't find out anything good. Here is the only one complete attempt, all the others got abandoned before finish.
![[Image: s1umv4.png]](http://i44.tinypic.com/s1umv4.png)
looks totally like a davis who grew up in a jungle... I LOVE IT!!!
critic though:
you could add maybe a bit of muscles.
I would make something like this.
![[Image: VyieqJ4.png]](http://i.imgur.com/VyieqJ4.png)
bit hair edit, face, and muscles