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RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Evil Sonidow - 11-23-2008
Story's out. Comments HERE.
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - SirFrog - 11-23-2008
Good start, Sonidow! I like the idea about the music, and i have yet not discovered a single spelling error!
Edit: quick reply XD
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Silverthorn - 11-23-2008
woa, awesome! Love the music idea and the story itself, of course. Great work, keep it up!
little spelling mistake, as far as I know it's "concrete"
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Evil Sonidow - 11-23-2008
Fixed that. (It's just a letter.)
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Zabobula - 11-23-2008
Very, very good. It's a unique way of approaching storytelling using the music n all. A good selection too. An Epic Pass! XD Keep up the good work.
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Azriel - 11-24-2008
definitely the best start.
Azriel~
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Evil Sonidow - 11-29-2008
Just wanna let you know that I've been extremely busy the past week and that's the cause behind no new chapters. That might be fixed soon though.
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Guigs - 11-29-2008
I was really interested to know why the chapters weren't coming.
I'm not a big fan of 'from the future' stories, but i liked yours
.gif ";)")
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - Zabobula - 11-29-2008
Take your time man, no rush here.
RE: Veiled Chains ~ Discussion - The Lost Global Mod - 04-20-2009
I really would like to see you continue this story.
there is everything there what a story needs.. depth, right punctation, an interesting contenct and an good writing style
PLEASE CONTINUE