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RE: Hari's scribbles - Silverthorn - 05-04-2012
Great work, really! From only these 2 sprites, one can already derive some sort of "style" from you (as in: see a new sprite, know it belongs to you). Really great work on both of them!
Two minor things that could be improved (other than the previous suggestions), imo, are the hair-shading (especially the left side should be, unless made clear otherwise, darker than the rest) and the skin-contrasts. Try to increase latter, so that it becomes easy to recognize in the big version and visible in the smaller one. But, again, these things are just minor, other than that, they're awesome. Keep it up!
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RE: Hari's scribbles - Monolanier - 05-04-2012
(05-04-2012, 06:58 PM)The Hari Wrote: If we talking about proportions - it's truth, I don't know ANYTHING about it. Maybe I should read some in the website.
actualy some people do not need to know proportions.
Its just tracing thats all, and thats why it was same to me at beggining.
You have some nice sprites
Hari- rep sprite, try to make ear bit smaller and arms thicker. Contrast between colors on skin.
Delia - Betrayed angel.Contrast between colors on skin.Hair falling is not natural. Eye sight is not natural too.
RE: Hari's scribbles - The Hari - 05-05-2012
Another work, at this time I worked on 158x158 size. This size is actually better than former which I used. I didn't have any good idea for scythe, so it can look poorly. So tell me, what do you think, is this size is better, what about proportions (maybe head is too big - again:P) and here is my work:
![[Image: grace.png]](http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/8567/grace.png)
Grace - Teenage deathOriginal size (Click to View)
![[Image: graceoriginal.png]](http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/4429/graceoriginal.png)
RE: Hari's scribbles - Marko pro - 05-05-2012
Another great sprite!!
Some critics form me:
-i think that shlouder is to "strong" for a girll!
-right foot its little to big.
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This time you improve hair style shading,exelent,clothes shade is still good,
and for face(really cleverly from you to cover it)i cant say anythings!!!
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For head,I dont know,to me looks fine!!!
RE: Hari's scribbles - Bla bla bla 44 - 05-05-2012
Really cool
. As Marko pointed out the right foot is a little bigger. Other than that perfect! You have really cool ideas for this sprites. Keep it up! 
RE: Hari's scribbles - Shane - 05-05-2012
Pretty much what Bla bla bla 44 said.
RE: Hari's scribbles - The Hari - 05-05-2012
Sure, I know that I should read a looot about proportions (and I'll do this). But notice one thing in this foot, she standing sideways and right foot is some hide behind left foot.
RE: Hari's scribbles - Marko pro - 05-06-2012
(05-05-2012, 09:13 PM)The Hari Wrote: But notice one thing in this foot, she standing sideways and right foot is some hide behind left foot.I thought that foot its too big versus thickness of the legs (no of this second foot)!!!!!!
RE: Hari's scribbles - drako - 05-06-2012
The shading is too good. Her shoulder is broad, just make it slim. I see that you're are spriting it very nicely. I will like to see more sprites from you.
RE: Hari's scribbles - The Hari - 05-06-2012
I bethought, is it good idea to show this, alas I decided to show this s*it... I really don't like this sprite, but notwithstanding tell me what do you think. I don't give him any name and absolutely don't add to gallery in first post. His design is lecherous. What for I even show this?! (not bad self-criticism, huh?)
Screw up this, I have pretty nice idea for archangel, maybe I'll draw him tonight (alternatively yesterday).
Edit:
Too late, I deleted this crappy sprite, just wait for archangel.