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RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - bashscrazy - 08-22-2011
good detail!
I think his right pupil/iris should be a bit smaller
The way he's holding his right arm looks weird.
I've said this many times before but I'll say it again. Raise the waist line a few pixels
![[Image: CTFjL.png]](http://i.imgur.com/CTFjL.png)
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - XLittlebob252 - 08-23-2011
![[Image: gl6lF.png]](http://i.imgur.com/gl6lF.png)
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - bashscrazy - 08-23-2011
The armour and muscles are awesome
But I think the knees are a bit low
head sucks though lol
![[Image: 66jcL.png]](http://i.imgur.com/66jcL.png)
I edited his face and moved his eyes down a pixel and changed them a bit- made his nose 1 pixel
I made his hair a bit longer and moved his waistline a couple of pixels up.
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - XLittlebob252 - 08-23-2011
fixed hair and fixed eyes and made shading darker
![[Image: J13Bi.png]](http://i.imgur.com/J13Bi.png)
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - Sonic Boom - 08-23-2011
Looks nice!
But his Armour is a bit too long i guess..
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - drako - 08-23-2011
Your sprite is too good! Your sprites are particularly well shaded.
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - MnM - 08-23-2011
Started getting much better. I assure you that , if u practice now by seeing references , and also practice gesture drawing , within no time you are going to blast up to a new level since u have pretty good experience. i think that u scarcely use reference ? Cause most of your sprite are not in correct proportions , placements. Dont take it to the heart , but to the mind. Make it your aim to study more anatomy and placements. As i said, within no time u will be a super spriter.
Cheers~
M'n'M
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - XLittlebob252 - 08-23-2011
thanks for the comments everybody
@me'n'mine i practice daily
i do use reference its just latley i started spriting from scratch so its pretty hard to get anatomy right.
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - XLittlebob252 - 08-26-2011
a little 280X280 try
![[Image: 7OUKE.png]](http://i.imgur.com/7OUKE.png)
RE: New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252 - Infern112 - 08-26-2011
Nice one, I just dont like the boots.