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RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - WatermelonOwl - 09-15-2012
Dennis (Click to View)
![[Image: dennis_by_watermelonowl-d5esr2w.png]](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/258/9/9/dennis_by_watermelonowl-d5esr2w.png)
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - Hero destroyer - 09-15-2012
I'm really impressed how you shaded his hair. Nice!
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles (EDITED POST) - Gespenst - 09-15-2012
He looks realy femine.
His left palm looks flat. How about if youll make his eyes more manly, you know, less black color. His shoulders are realy spiky and bit too high. Those round balls doesnt work for me. And his left hand 5th finger, which is supposed to be small, now its almost longest.
Thats my opinion. Writing nice and so is spam to me.
Good luck next time.
EDIT:
(09-15-2012, 10:13 AM)Men'Mine Wrote: Come one EXG9 this is chibi drawing..actualy no
Chibi is smaller form of any existing character, meant to look cute. Usually has irregular proportions, with a big head and tiny limbs.
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - MnM - 09-15-2012
Come one EXG9 this is chibi drawing..
@WMO: Comparing with your previous works, its not your best. The palms just lack details and the left wrist is out of perspective. Its as if its completely 180* twisted through the axis of arms.
Apart from that I like how you worked with BG and the feel is awesome. good luck ^_^
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - Hero destroyer - 09-15-2012
(09-15-2012, 08:23 AM)EXG9 Wrote: He looks realy femine.
His left palm looks flat. How about if youll make his eyes more manly, you know, less black color. His shoulders are realy spiky and bit too high. Those round balls doesnt work for me. And his left hand 5th finger, which is supposed to be small, now its almost longest.
Thats my opinion. Writing nice and so is spam to me.
Good luck next time.
I think she said it before that she had no idea how to draw those muscular guys, just like we had difficulty drawing girls too.
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - Gespenst - 09-15-2012
No no no... You think manly mans are only musclular, nope, i meant its figure, mans have different figure, neck and other parts like eyes.
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - WatermelonOwl - 09-15-2012
ok, i see. thanks for the helpful critique, EXG9.
and that blue ball thing is suppose to be Chase Blast if it wasnt clear... XD
V: oh XD
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - Gespenst - 09-15-2012
(09-15-2012, 03:02 PM)WatermelonOwl Wrote: and that blue ball thing is suppose to be Chase Blast if it wasnt clear... XDi meant on a hair
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - WatermelonOwl - 10-03-2012
Louis VS Bat (Click to View)
![[Image: louis_vs_bat_by_watermelonowl-d5gr5de.png]](http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/277/f/c/louis_vs_bat_by_watermelonowl-d5gr5de.png)
RE: WatermelonOwl's Doodles - Kashif - 10-03-2012
bat
are you really 13 age