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My Wikia Chosen Beta, feedback and collaboration is welcome - Bupkis - 10-02-2017
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RE: My Wikia Chosen Beta, feedback and collaboration is welcome - Silverthorn - 10-05-2017
Yo, what are you actually going for? "Designing" a character and building a story around him seems like a risky move; doing it the other way round is a tad easier.
Also...
(10-02-2017, 03:19 PM)Oeiji Wrote: Just need help with arcs and ideasSo you're telling me that you have no storyline whatsoever? In LF2-terms, this would be equivalent to "Hey I have a name for a char, anybody has an idea how he could look like and what moves he could have?".
(10-02-2017, 03:19 PM)Oeiji Wrote: Trying to relate it with these characters would like this story to be like a certain magical index, yu yu hakusho, hunter x hunter, fate / stay night unlimited blade works, saint seiya, gantz, beelzebub, bleach, the law of ueki, magi, tokyo underground and zatch bell.
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Sorry but I honestly don't see where this is going...
RE: My Wikia Chosen Beta, feedback and collaboration is welcome - rewlf2 - 10-05-2017
My more precise opinion is try not to make it a Mary Sue or Gary Sue.
A more general one, is I don't understand what you are trying to convey with these characters when you are going to develop stories after fleshing out them. But it is a completely valid way, just unusual because you have to shape (back)story after designing them, not the other way around.