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Char Auron - zero_legends - 12-18-2008
Hy guys. I'm a new user ( as u know
) and I'm planning to finish and realease my first well made and drawed character, Auron. He's still in progress though and I have alot of work to be done with. I made him a fight type. His moves are : 1. Normal bombs to throw. Gonna use john's balls sprites. 2. Tornado Kick. Meaning he'll kick a little and form a full tornado. 3. Up ball down ball. ( in easy meaning ) he will hit the ground and whoever will get caught in the bombs going up, he will go sky high and land roughly on the ground. 4. Power bomb. A little long bomb that whoever it hits, grabs him and penetrates heavy damage. 5. Drive through. A powerfull punch that goes along way!![[Image: 339ipvm.jpg]](http://i41.tinypic.com/339ipvm.jpg)
What do u guys think? Comments and suggestions are pleased. Please no critiszem. I'm just a newcomer!
RE: Char Auron - no one - 12-18-2008
The moves sound creative but the hair look a litter bit weird.
RE: Char Auron - zero_legends - 12-18-2008
Thanks for welcoming me no one. Your suggestion about the hair is right but I searched through about ten or so hair styles that'll suit him. So, the finishing results were this cause it's best with a fight character and a evil one.
PS: I disappreciate good guys. Badguys rule!
RE: Char Auron - sadbhav - 12-18-2008
Well....the moves are creative except the up down ball thingy, Its already there in CE LF2
RE: Char Auron - Silverthorn - 12-18-2008
hey, nice char! only a few things that I'd like to improve in there:
# remove the bright borders around your char. Either no borders or (as in original lf2) little black borders. but no bright borders.
# his right shoe is kinda weird in the transition from shoe to pants. should be more like: ---------, not diagonal
# a little more shading around the shoes in general
don't take these as an offense, I just want to help ya
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RE: Char Auron - zero_legends - 12-20-2008
Wow thanks BP for the suggestions! Yeah I know that ain't offence. Alright let's move to suggestions....
About the borders I didn't understand. What bright borders? A little more discription outa be nice if it doesn't bug u.
Yeah I'll do a little more shadings on the shoe.
The position of his right foot is ( since I drew him on top of template and how I wan't his stance ) supposed to be like that cause a straight foot will look funky. Don't u think it'll look funky? I think so.....
Anyways thanks for the suggestions I'll fix them as soon as possible.
RE: Char Auron - Silverthorn - 12-20-2008
alright, see that yellow-ish border around his head? It should be non-existent, and if you want a border, you should make it really thin and dark. Just to follow the main lf2-character style
RE: Char Auron - Yinseko - 12-20-2008
char based on Jack?
RE: Char Auron - The Lost Global Mod - 12-20-2008
wow cool char.. cool ideas.. keep that up
no i think it is based of template..
RE: Char Auron - zero_legends - 12-21-2008
That border thing is a bandana ( as u know ). I kept it a little big cause his hair style makes his head look big so I put it on and made a bang to his most of it. Here's what I think u meant. Oh and it was based off template. Jack is fat and ugly
.![[Image: faaa81.jpg]](http://i42.tinypic.com/faaa81.jpg)
Here's the touch up's. I fixed head band , gave shoes shading and gave the hair some touch ups around the sides. Did I mess up on the face? Tell me I didn't!
