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My sprites (chase123) - chase123 - 12-21-2008 UPDATE 1 (Click to View) UPDATE 2 (Click to View) RE: My sprites - ~Dome~ - 12-21-2008 Well, sry to say but they look bad. You should improve these things: 1. - Hair look like an explosion - black pixels - much from firen - whats the orange thing on his t-shirt? - nearly no shading 2. - not 100% from scratch, I can see parts of Jack, Henry and Davis - T-shirt looks wierd - All in one he looks a bit small - too simple shading 3. - no shading - looks like he is dancing xD - T-shirt too big / pants too small - his head is in an false perspective - colors look a bit wierd RE: My sprites - zero_legends - 12-22-2008 You've got talent only a newcomer like u can have what it takes to show his sprite drawings that aren't well masterd. Here are what u need: 1st pic: - No shading ( same with dome ). - Hair is funky. Does he have an afro? - Wierd pixels and poor colouring. 2nd pic: - Same again, no shadings. - Fix jacket shading, brightness, texture and design. 3rd pic: - Legs are in a poor pose and in wierd direction. - Poor colouring. - Funky pose ( same with dome ). - Completley flat with no human like shape of body. - Too much shirt and too little pants ( same with dome again! ). Hard and sorry to say dude but u gotta fix alot of stuff. Keep trying. U have talent. With a little practice your hard work will come out. RE: My sprites - chase123 - 12-22-2008 Noooooooooooooo i didn't knew that i was that bad and yes the first one has the hairstyle Afro. RE: My sprites - lf2TimmE1 - 12-22-2008 and why are u making a new thread for this? RE: My sprites - KaywonnJuto - 12-22-2008 Actually the 2nd one isn't all that bad... The one in scratch sucks even if you didn't 100% scratch all of of us can do better than that... 1st as well... Work on the 2nd if you want... It reminds me of Davis & Dennis... Work on it he has a nice face but change the clothes a bit, keep the color if you want... I'm just saying... RE: My sprites - zero_legends - 12-24-2008 First of all nobody can make anything perfect u know. Second of all: PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT! Make sense? I saw with my own eyes 2 guys who drawed like they're babies and after one full year of practice they drawed like proffesionalls. Practice is what counts. And u aren't that bad of how your explaining your self. Keep it-up dude and draw like others do. Code: lf2TimmE1 Wrote: To show his sprites he has to make a new thread. What? U want him to post in somebody elses thread to show his artwork? RE: My sprites - Yinseko - 12-26-2008 em...second sprite...is Davis? O__o RE: My sprites - KaywonnJuto - 12-27-2008 Sorry, my answer was a bit rude, don't you think...? And yeah, For a first timer it's good (or ok in the least ) And yeah It does look somewhat-like Davis, but a chubby version of him, I guess? Right? RE: My sprites - Gad - 12-27-2008 Whoah!!! I love the third sprite! It's just incredible!!! O.O You should wait 2 years and then keep working with sprites. |