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[Sprite] Zeck (uptaded) - XLittlebob252 - 03-12-2009 This is my newst character and my second i saw so some tips from Aletric. Version 1: (fixed*) Version 2: almost every comment will help and i want to say thanks to Alerctric RE: [Sprite] Zeck - skelguardian - 03-12-2009 cool, i like it ! exept.. his hair looks like some kind of alien bug on his head (?) but the rest is nice! RE: [Sprite] Zeck - XLittlebob252 - 03-12-2009 thanks and ill fix it right away RE: [Sprite] Zeck - Alblaka - 03-12-2009 It still looks like a alien bug XD I think, it's way to much in the front and way to less at the back of his head... and it's maybe not enough shaded. Not sure, i suck at drawing hair (i suck at drawing generally)... BUT i can say, it looks strange ^^ RE: [Sprite] Zeck - XLittlebob252 - 03-12-2009 its my first drawing a hair... and its shaded very well RE: [Sprite] Zeck - Alectric - 03-13-2009 may i ask, what i helped you with? i like receiving credit, but what for is i want to know. oh was it my "how to become a jolly good sprite"? you have done a pretty good job! nothing too much to complain about and, well, since you seem to be so keen, i thought i would help ya out a bit and just fix a few things up: what i fixed: -added brighter bits and darker bits to his hair - fixed his arms into a more comfortable position - fixed his pants a little, made it more like he was bending his knee hope i helped again RE: [Sprite] Zeck (uptaded) - Ascor - 03-13-2009 hairs should be a little bit lower they look like knifes i like the char and i see much potential in him RE: [Sprite] Zeck (uptaded) - XLittlebob252 - 03-13-2009 thank you very much and ill try to make it lower.