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You want to attack me? Fine, try it...


Watch your feet, Water Elementals love to make you slipping!


Storm Snake!


You fool, now i will bury you beyond tons of stone...


Hmmm, he escaped... but the burning ground looks nice though.

(06-02-2009, 07:24 PM)HappyHouR Wrote:  would be nice if u show us ur works in a video . that way better then screenshot. your not spriter are ya?
if u sprite stuff ur characters&attacks will look more attractive.ya i know its obvious.

as for me i dont like much modification characters with original repainted spirtes ,unless u do cretive stuff like GBanditEX which 3 or 4 mods of attacking(transformion) or have really interesting data attacks.

am not saying i dont like ur characters . i didnt try those yet.

that was just small criticism k?

(06-02-2009, 07:24 PM)HappyHouR Wrote:  would be nice if u show us ur works in a video . that way better then screenshot. your not spriter are ya?
if u sprite stuff ur characters&attacks will look more attractive.ya i know its obvious.

as for me i dont like much modification characters with original repainted spirtes ,unless u do cretive stuff like GBanditEX which 3 or 4 mods of attacking(transformion) or have really interesting data attacks.

am not saying i dont like ur characters . i didnt try those yet.

that was just small criticism k?

Quote:i didnt try those yet.

(06-02-2009, 07:33 PM)Lf2-hacker Wrote:  gad made some cool tutorial for a thing you could use for a lightning

(06-02-2009, 07:46 PM)Yakui Wrote:  Also to the character itself: confusing as hell to use, still not quite sure what you mean with the spellcasting section, but I really did like some of the moves. The whole elemental thing gets pretty busy pretty fast.

(06-02-2009, 07:54 PM)HappyHouR Wrote:  am not that kinda guy . am just saying it will add more value to the his characters that all. if the data is good and creative then worth it.

i saw lots of characters with painted sprite and usauly end up as crappy character.am sure his stuff are good.
i know hes great dcer . i tried to download his mod but i give up . it didnt load.

i didnt b*tch or whin. i meant banme. ur were right. banme is pretty neat character.

Quote:I am sure his stuff areis good

Quote:i already made my best and ALWAYS say EVERYWHERE that i'm bad in spriting...

Quote:yes and it didnt work or so and i was lazy.

Quote:geez all i was saying good sprites make character much better. whats wrong with that.

@Char Display

Since I'm at school at the moment, this post is subject to change. However, I would like to somewhat advise against your current way of "displaying" or posting up about your character, just on a couple of points (if that's ok with you, that is).

1. Please explain exactly how the character works. I don't believe it is necessary to include a "half-readme" as a teaser, or include a teaser in your post at all . Just put your readme on the introductory post. I'm pretty sure that it you would gain more downloads that way, because almost everybody on LFE is lazy , and they want to know exactly what (in terms of content and quality) they're about to load on their hard drives before actually doing it (especially since they have to do the additional work of copy+pasting the data lines onto 'data.txt' and what-not to start playing ). I'm pretty sure that even you feel the same way about other released characters .

2) Regarding to the logos...they're a bit too big and detailed to serve a logo . Now if you call them promotional posters, that's a different story . But for logo, the picture should be simpler, and include less... objects .

That's about it for now. Will update post after testing this character once I get home.

Oh, and about the Character separation and parts. You do know that you can simply wrap all the files up into one archive, and then choose the 'split' option on WINRAR to separate it into smaller files automatically .

*Wooh* I had time to test the character!

@Character

Jamel Test:

First off, I would like to say that I'm probably one of the only persons who actually tested this character really thoroughly, and the more I play with him, the more impressed I am! This is by far your greatest work yet! Best creativity I've ever seen (man, I've gotta take a peek at that DC coding)! Even I can't think of something like this (and I'm pretty damn big dreamer )! *Whew* You deserve a big @$$-pat on the back!

Good Stuff I Noted:

1) The entire concept of elemental summoning and what-not (it's like a fuse of Yu-Gi-Oh, Magic the Gathering, and Little Fighter 2 )

2) The huge @$$-variety of moves!

3) The huge @$$-amount of advanced DC.

4) Your effort. Despite all the other comments, I know it was hella hard coding all of this, and implementing this seeming pipe dream into an actual character!

Note that this is the 4th creation I've tested of yours , so I can actually physically see your improvement .

Ok, now to move onto the only few criticisms I can find.....

1) Confusing Readme: It's a lot better if you post all the detailed, story-related instructions/description in your introductory post (as I've said above) . The readme is for instructions, disclaimer, and contact info only. Include only the practical information (aka just simple knowledge on how to use the character, and leave all the other stuff out), especiallyfor an advanced/complicated character like Jamel . This criticism is not really about the character, but how you present it, so please don't take this as an insult .

2) Elemental Bugs/Glitches: I know that this is may be known bug/glitch, and that probably there is no possible DC solution to solve it, but the part where all the elementals simply *disappear*, or gets used, and nothing comes out (because not the full amount is consumed, even though they are all present) is extremely annoying, and can really take away the game experience (possibly even under-powering the character ). Basically, all that happens is that Jamel wastes a ton of mana creating the elementals, and nothing happens . You should try your best to fix the bug, even though it may not even be possible to fix it .

Overall, if I were a teacher , I'd give you 98%. Damn good work!
At everyone else. If you are going to download a character created by Alblaka, you MUST download Jamel first and foremost period. End of discussion.

I'll go do my homework now.....