The World Of Juvenile. - MnM - 11-10-2010
OK guy, Am going to start a new thread in story section forum. Am not a pro in it. My main aim of joining here is to improve my English. Hope you get my point.
Now i am confused to select a theme for my story. I don't want to make something like phil did(Selecting characters from members) cause i think i suck at it.
I will post a poll. I currently can write in 5 themes. (make me a simple theme)
my inspiration : Joanne Kathleen Rowling (known as J.K Rowling)
UPDATE
The Beginning
Chapter 1
A cool winter morning. 5'O clock. Everyone were working busy and tensed. I woke up by the songs of birds enjoying the morning sunshine.
Am a Lazy arse. Got up brushed my teeth and finished my human works. Wore my favourite T-shirt with "YES , No , MAYBE" in it. I put my jerkin and went off
for a walk.
Jess my mom always likes me. She is adores me than anything in the world and i adore her as much as she adores me. She was always been nice to me.
I passed by a bush of cherries . Plucked two and chewed it while i walked along the road. The road was badly damaged due to heavy downpour. I met my friends by the sitting bench.
We went for a game of basket ball.
"so, How u doing Aaron?" Albert, my juniour friend studying 9th grade asked me.
"fine!, its been long i saw u. What happened dude?"i aksed.
" Nothing, Just went off for a camp with mom and dad"He paused and shrugged his shoulders " turned out bad.."
"why? what happened?!" i exclaimed."Has something happened to your mom or dad?
" No ,No not to them. Its to me" He gazed at me with his bright blue eyes." i broke up with alley"
"Oh! i am sorry Al" I patted his shoulder." Oh nothing u have to worry" he strengthened his heart............  itch Black]
Pitch Black
Chapter 2
After a five minute walk, we arrived to the play ground. Usually we do the same: Go to sitting bench, Drop your things and then go have fun. Yeah today we did the same.
My friends Navneeth, Steve, Mani, Albert are really a good players. Am a bit fat( not too though just some depositions in thigh and butt makes me feel so) but my mom used to
say to me that "you are not fat my child, u are good looking". I know, That those were the words of comfort. So, i don't bother it.
We started playing."common Aaro pass the ball here!" bellowed Nav. I passed him the ball. He made 3-points shoot. Which boosted our score. Yeah he is tall so it's easy for
him to do. Suddenly, it started getting dark. We didn't know why. Since we know it might usually rain, we brought our jerkins and umbrellas. We continued as if nothing
happened. Zhhhhhhhheewwwwww..... A portal opened behind my back. Pitch dark. Suddenly, a green, thin, numb hand picked me up and dragged me inside.
I couldn't see a thing. It was as if in a dream. I just could feel that numb hand clutching my shoulder. It nearly broke my shoulder. Then Suddenly it ended with an opening. It was bright, yellow bright. I was thrown in what it felt was a carpet. ----I laid there unconscious---.[/spoiler]
Gragon and The Mentor
Chapter 3
"Why did u pick him up here brother! Father told not to do so, it would mean danger to him and to us!".
"Shhhh.. Alsindra, don't worry my sister. There is no problem with it. Brother knows what to do"
"hmph.. Since when u know what to do Sko!"
"Silence.. He is waking up!" Sko breathed to Alsindra.
I slowly opened my eyes. My eyes were watering and things were appearing blurred in front of my eyes. I thought maybe 10,000 years travel-back-in-time caused it. It was not less than the truth..
I saw, two young people of my age standing there eying me eagerly. They both had straw coloured hair with gleaming brown eyes which pierced my eyes much more.
"Where.. Am..I" I asked. It was almost a great attempt to ask it. Maybe i might have screamed while i was dragged over here...
"you are safe Aaron brother"said Sko in an encouraging voice.
"You know my name!!" I fought my throat and shouted up to what i can.I almost tried to sit up. It was a fail.
"Calm down brother Aaron" Sko helped me back to the cotton bed or it was a straw bed which i was lying on.
"Who.. WHO..WHO!! the hell you both are? U both dragged me here? Where am I. No, don't do anything to me.. no.." I almost cried.
"No, no, brother, we won't harm you. You will know why you are here in a short while. Just stay calm."
I saw that pretty cute girl standing next to him. That.. what? yeah.. that Alsindra girl.She, gave me a brief smile. I returned her one.
"You pulled me to this place?"I asked to Sko who was eying me crookedly.
"Yeah yeah.." He answered as if I broke him from a deep thought.
"Then my friends could have watched you pulling me over this weird place...".
"This is not a weird place Aaron brother. And, about your friends, we modified their memories..".
"Modified what?".
"Memories my brother". He answer politely.
"Gah.. You guys are weird!. How could one possibly modify other's memory!? Am totally confu- Uh-uh-uh -Fetch me some water!!" My throat went dry.Within a fraction of second he was near me handing me water with what it seemed was pot. I gulped it spilling water all over me. The water tasted different. It was as if some ingredients were added to it which made it sweeter and cozy to throat.
"Alsindra, go and inform father about Aaron brother."
"OK". She nodded on dismissal.
"Now, can you explain me where the heck am i?" I demanded to Sko.
"Heck?" He questioned me.
"yeah, Heck!"
"you are in the palace of Juvenescent in the world of Juvenile."
"The world of what?"
"Juvenile, brother.. it means Young, you know that.."
"yeah i know, but it is some thing weird.. Why would I be here?"
"No brother, i can't tell you everything. It's considered treason.."
"Oh man, common.."
The room came clearly to my vision now. It was dimly lit by the torch placed at a corner and there were no other light source except the door. I thought I was
We heard soft foot steps heading towards the basement. About three people were heading. We also heard scratching of metals
Through the door came three young people. Two of them wearing armors and one wearing crown and a Black cape touching the ground.
"Hello, Aaron" The one with the crown greeted me with some sort of bow which I don't know. At the least he didn't call me brother.
"Hello.." I replied to him politely cause he sounded commanding and authoritative.
"Welcome to the world of Juvenile. I am Juvenescent, the king of this world for the past hundred years. People have accepted me as king and wish to continue the same" . It took me a while to get what he told. But i managed. "Oh" i replied surprised.
"You are here for a purpose Aaron". He shot a look at the others standing in the room. They went away with that different kind of bow. I captured a glimpse of it its is nothing but just cross your legs with each other and bend forwards turning right side. It looked funny, but I thought it would be useful when I have to use it.
"Aaron," He continued when they were out of ear-shot."Our world is in a great danger. Many evil forces are being sent by the most infamous Gragon. Yeah, he is the leader of that evil force. A terror looking creature. With nostrils, Razor sharp teeth, claws, green with extra-ordinary muscles. He has killed the king who ruled this place before me.I some how managed to protect our empire by my powers. I was also like u Aaron, but i am losing my powers. Once, one rule for more than 90 years he loses his power. That's the reason you are here now. Yeah, you are the one to stop that Gragon".
"But. but.. Why me? Not some one else?!!" I exclaimed.
"Aaron, sorry to say that, I don't know the reason. It is said by our mentor. He is the one who taught every king who ruled this world for ages. And, he will be the one to teach you Aaron. He has got many powers which no one will no. Everyone in this world has their own power. And, I have got the power to control feelings and many more. You get one power for each and every stages of advancement. It is believed that you, will possess every power. And, so you are here." And, with his final bow he went leaving me hopeless.
The search for Mentor
Chapter 4
A very pleasant morning. Really a pleasant morning. This world seems to be very much suited for my body. The sun shone brightly on the sky with the screeching of birds
I went on walking along the beach. But its really weird isn't it? Now I remember why i am here. A beautiful girl is walking past me. She is so beautiful. I cannot take
my eyes off her. So attractive eyes. Really attractive.. She smiles at me. I return her one.
"hello.." She blushed.
"oh hi.." I turned pink.
"Aaron brother, wake up!". I hear some one bellowing. "Wake up brother.." some one was brushing my mouth with a cloth. I must have been in dreams. I slowly opened my eyes
and saw Sko cleaning away my saliva.
"Brother.. I was nearly waking you for ten minutes. I must have disturbed you from your sleep. Cause, I know how much tired it will be when u travel through trans-dimensional
portal. But, its time for you to start your journey brother." said Sko.
"Wait wha-" my throat choked up again. Sko again gave me that pepper-mint or what ever it is water.
"calm down. There is nothing to be worried. You will need more water. Come on, drink more." He poured liters of water. My stomach never filled.
"How do you feel now brother?" Sko questioned me.
"Way better. Anyway.. where should i journey?" I asked.
"Well, this journey is in the search of mentor." said Sko.
"what? I thought... Never you mind." I finished.
"I understand brother."
"No you don't." We heard some one coming.
A man wearing a long cape with a hat having a feather stuck to it entered.
"Honorable sko, I have a message for you."
"Yes proceed"
"Most Mighty king has requested Aaron the chosen one to be at the court in an hour."
"Ok, send him my word." Commanded Sko.
"As you wish sir." He left with that bow.
"Aaron brother, that explains. We have to be there. This is really important. You have to believe me. There is no other go." those words cam swiftly from his mouth.
It took time for me to understand.
"Alright then, the adventure begins!" I cried.
"Yes brother, That's the spirit."
This chapter is under progress
RE: Juvenile. - oliveryungo - 11-10-2010
Why don't you just do eeny meeny miny mo and be done with it? 
RE: Juvenile. - paschendale - 11-10-2010
I'll start.
you're starving
you haven't eaten in hours because you're lazy as hell and surfing web
you finally decide to traverse 4 meters distance through 1 door and 2 right turns to get to the fridge
the thought of savoring that meal to come is the only thing keeping you from collapsing
you open the fridge. [censored]
what happens next?
RE: Juvenile. - Ragor - 11-10-2010
Reaper, how? Just tell me how, is that innappropriate?
What I think he meant, Reaper, is that it was continued, not anything 'wrong' of that nature.
RE: Juvenile. - MnM - 11-10-2010
Just give a vote.
RE: Juvenile. - Ragor - 11-10-2010
Yeah I have, Reaper. He opened the fridge and something happened.
And I voted for 'mystery' firzenx.
RE: Juvenile. - chase123 - 11-10-2010
I voted for adventure,It's always good to see a story of someone's life.
RE: Juvenile. - MnM - 11-10-2010
^ its a public poll. No need to worry. (dont consider this spam )
RE: Juvenile. - Alblaka - 11-10-2010
Won't vote because i would choose "magic adventure" which isn't a valid option...
RE: Juvenile. - MnM - 11-10-2010
Just Specify here Alblaka and everyone who feels the same.
I Give Myself freedom and do a story with adventure. Then go around with mystery.
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