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Another LF2 Story~ - Kevin - 07-10-2011

Select character

Firen


More coming pretty soon.




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Hey, this is probably my first time writing a story more than two pages. I never wrote a story without anyone making me to. This is the first time xD . I'll listen to any comments & critics. If you don't know, I'm not even good at English, and very often I used translate google to find the needed words/phrases.

And dammit I can't find a title xP.

I have already planned a guideline to my whole story (which will be much longer than the one I have posted above, because I want all main chars to have their own story). I hope I won't be too lazy for this coz I'll have pretty little time for tomorrow I start my school again. I'll finish Firen's story first.


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - Hero destroyer - 07-10-2011

Interesting stories.
but, instead of saying "you" all the time. why don't you say Firen? He IS the main character, right?

Title:
Similar to my mod if you want:
ROJ>>Return Of Julian
PW>> Power Within
Good luck with the stories.:D


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - Kevin - 07-10-2011

:D thanks

well it's all about defeating Julian but I don't think Return of Julian fits to my story. let it be untitled for now.. I'm not in mood to bother it xD .


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - empirefantasy - 07-10-2011

Nice story.I like the idea of it.

Why you didn't write it in Microsoft oneNote?! You posted a thread about that!


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - Kevin - 07-11-2011

Well it is in oneNote and I just pasted them all here... I think I will add the choices etc after I have finished all the important parts of the story (this will mean finishing at least Firen's, Bat's, Henry's, and Deep's stories) because, you know... even that I have planned my story, many things are still changing up to my head :D that's why I posted FIren's story only when I have finished it (well there's no ending yet though)


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - LSwarley - 07-13-2011

"This is Davis, more than just a friend of mine" xD

like ur story ^^ it makes me excited and id like to read more


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - Kevin - 07-14-2011

Added parts 16-18. what a damned ending in Firen's story -.-
but, this story still continues.

anyway...
:D :D :D glad you're excited .
I also updated 'coming not pretty soon' to 'coming pretty soon', lol


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - LSwarley - 07-15-2011

hmm.. short ending
but who am i to critisize that xD

offtopic?: i already got a plenty of ideas for my own story but dont feel like writing xD too lazy although i have nothing to do except of lying on the couch and dreaming =P


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - Hero destroyer - 07-15-2011

Awman. An sad ending.:(
I'm gonna kill Julian in LF2 game.:D


RE: Another LF2 Story~ - LSwarley - 07-15-2011

offtopic:hmm.. u convinced me to write more updated my thread xD

now that i tjhink of it: runs out of souls? means souls have no chance to return? means all no happy ending at all not only for freeze and firen xD
i think at least save some lives like : the rest of the souls returned to their bodies and they realized that they fought too slow thay couldnt save much ppl and that would decrease the "sad" ending of freeze n firen ^^ but idk mayb u made this on purpose but i dont feel like thats the real thing or thats how it shld be ^^