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atar arts - Atar Jonas - 02-12-2012
my first sh*t
![[Image: m8rO6.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/m8rO6.jpg)
RE: atar arts - prince_freeza - 02-12-2012
not bad.. not bad at all.. i like you shading sense, some dirty outline work left but ok.. do something else, i wanna see what else can you do
.gif ";)")
RE: atar arts - ossiee - 02-12-2012
wow, its good
great for first one, i want to see more..... keep it up!
RE: atar arts - hell fightter - 02-19-2012
agreed with gad at al of points especially at last one, great begining
character is kinda square, looks preaty much 2d-ish.. kind of flat. over then this its good begining. Also try to watch your character face to be more symmetrical.
but as i said great work
looking forward for more
RE: atar arts - Atar Jonas - 03-08-2012
here is my hand drawing:
river viiperi (Click to View)
![[Image: eR5ej.png]](http://i.imgur.com/eR5ej.png)
RE: atar arts - ossiee - 03-08-2012
wow amazing!!! you are very tallented...... everything is amazing but one thing..... his eyebrow is getting out of lines, anyway great job.
RE: atar arts - Monolanier - 03-08-2012
Nice one.
Even if there is some proportion flaws, still, i havent seen human which might have perfect face proportions,
some humans have different face structure.
RE: atar arts - Marko pro - 03-09-2012
Fantastic work.I love your arts.I`enjoying.
Really nice shading one the first one and try to paint and second art.
Second art have one "bug".Ears is to much down.(upper wedge need finish where is eyebrow/need be bigger)
Look yourself in mirror if you don`t believe me.
EDIT: btw first one haven`t ears.
You don`t like ears or....?