Project | Suren or Fighter-Davis

[Ariel]

umm yes
why, you dont like it?

[Reaper]

It's looking rather strange. Especially the movement of the hair and the arms.
Some breathing tuts on this site:
http://img525.imageshack.us/i/breathing0jz.gif/
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=2979
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=2469
It's looking like a nice char btw. I'm interested in what attacks he will get.

[Simoneon]

Well if you want my honest opinion I could tell you...
The left hand is shaking too much, the breathing animation is wrong. Try to look at yourself when you're breathing - do you move like that?
Other thing is pistol. Try to google one, or maybe resize some from there and put it on your char. Really it doesn't look right to me. (it's just my opinion ;D)
These are things that you should edit.

After all, it has a nice idea and some nice muscles there ;D Thumbs up for this project!

Edit: DAMN YOU REAPER, NINJA! DO YOU HAVE SUGAR?!