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i cant see its eyes
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and i love your shading style
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10-04-2012, 02:48 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-04-2012, 02:55 PM by LutiChris.)
Her hair has so much saturation compared to the rest of the clothing.
Tone it down for her or you can make the rest of her clothing saturated (that might not turn out so great, but go ahead and test it out)
Her skin looks like it needs more contrast as well, i can't say much about using that lighter skin color since i tend to avoid anything thats too close to white.
Since her pose looks like she's floating at that angle. Make the rest of her features, such as her hair, shirt and dress/pants? go with the flow :P
also i can't really tell if thats a Kimono, or pants? so make sure it stands out what they are. I have a feel it is a Kimono just because she's all asain-like. But because the shading is focused on those two legs they look like legs.
There's also a lack of shading oh her top part, try filling out more of it if you could.
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