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Mine's Sprites
@^: he uses photoshop.
@sprite above: looks more like a drawing than a sprite.
-the fist is too small, make it bigger for a more lf2 style (even in real life, your fist is wider than the rest of your arm)
-make the arms bigger too
-the pants need more shading
otherwise it's awesome man! Keep up the great job! :D
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its not a human XD its a robot ( My robot). Cyborg. XD
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You should at least have a reference for anatomy, the chest seems to be unequal to each other, adding to what Tania said. Concerning the shading, add depth to your shading, define the figure and muscle structure (or metal structure, or whatever you would call it for the cyborg).
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well, added some fist and added shading to pants. Now ist 158x158
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Arms are still too shorts, the pants make his legs look skinny (unless it was tight jeans or something). The hair needs more definition (lines, perhaps more depth), looks like a plain old hat, the back of the hair has to be more smooth, it can't be that sharp.
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Since i got some critics earlier, i decided to make a base so that i could use it for standing pose every time when i draw on my own. And the out come is below. I used flash to make the base. It is so easy to do it. If there is any mistakes in that base give me critcs. So that i could draw uber cool things every time. XD Kinda blurting around so sorry ^^.
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Yes,there are several problems with it,I'll begin:
1.The left arm is lower than the right arm.
2.The right leg is also lower than the left feet.
3.The head could use better positioning.
4.His arms are also thin.

Though you made this from scratch,the proportions are quite like the usual little fighter sprites,his muscles look good too.

You are showing improvement in every sprite of yours!
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new Sprite:
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The abs are a bit too centered (out of placed) move them to the right...
muscles are an ok job...as well as the hair
fix the face, they allways seem to be squished on facial features, let loose and widen them apart and u should be fine...
i really like how u did the shading on those pants, nice job... ;)
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Thanks to freeza for teaching me to do sprites effectively ^^
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