Wow man, that was pretty deep. Oh and talk about overkill. Lol i shoulda explained my power a bit more but that's fine.
Oh and btw
“I guess now would be a good time to talk about angels...”
LMFAO
EDIT: I noticed i didnt really give a review here. I just caught up in the chapters and they all seem to be pretty freakin sweet. The grammar errors were many but it did not deter me away from the story. I really like your style of storytelling because if I can visualize it, then its a good story. I'm pretty sure everyone has their own visual interpretation of the story. I see this medieval era in my opinion, which may or may not be what you were going for. But the story is good either way.
I think the stories forum has a new top storyteller. O_O
Oh and btw
“I guess now would be a good time to talk about angels...”
LMFAO
EDIT: I noticed i didnt really give a review here. I just caught up in the chapters and they all seem to be pretty freakin sweet. The grammar errors were many but it did not deter me away from the story. I really like your style of storytelling because if I can visualize it, then its a good story. I'm pretty sure everyone has their own visual interpretation of the story. I see this medieval era in my opinion, which may or may not be what you were going for. But the story is good either way.
I think the stories forum has a new top storyteller. O_O
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