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The vengeance
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Wow man, that was pretty deep. Oh and talk about overkill. Lol i shoulda explained my power a bit more but that's fine.

Oh and btw
“I guess now would be a good time to talk about angels...”

LMFAO

EDIT: I noticed i didnt really give a review here. I just caught up in the chapters and they all seem to be pretty freakin sweet. The grammar errors were many but it did not deter me away from the story. I really like your style of storytelling because if I can visualize it, then its a good story. I'm pretty sure everyone has their own visual interpretation of the story. I see this medieval era in my opinion, which may or may not be what you were going for. But the story is good either way.

I think the stories forum has a new top storyteller. O_O
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
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The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-20-2009, 04:20 PM
RE: The vengeance - need profiles - by sadbhav - 05-21-2009, 07:37 AM
RE: The vengeance - need profiles - by Magnamancy - 05-21-2009, 08:27 AM
RE: The vengeance - need profiles - by Zabobula - 05-21-2009, 11:44 AM
RE: The vengeance - need profiles - by Drahcir - 05-22-2009, 12:53 AM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-22-2009, 01:31 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Zabobula - 05-22-2009, 01:58 PM
RE: The vengeance - by sadbhav - 05-22-2009, 02:22 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-23-2009, 10:52 AM
RE: The vengeance - by sadbhav - 05-23-2009, 02:45 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-23-2009, 02:54 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Drahcir - 05-23-2009, 03:02 PM
RE: The vengeance - by The Lost Global Mod - 05-23-2009, 05:53 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-23-2009, 05:56 PM
RE: The vengeance - by prince_freeza - 05-23-2009, 06:00 PM
RE: The vengeance - by sadbhav - 05-24-2009, 08:02 AM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-24-2009, 01:24 PM
RE: The vengeance - by sadbhav - 05-24-2009, 02:49 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-25-2009, 02:33 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Zabobula - 05-26-2009, 02:52 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-26-2009, 02:59 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Zabobula - 05-26-2009, 03:04 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-29-2009, 05:37 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 05-30-2009, 05:49 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-03-2009, 05:05 PM
RE: The vengeance - by SirisRhazael - 06-04-2009, 01:20 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Zabobula - 06-05-2009, 01:12 AM
RE: The vengeance - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-05-2009, 08:50 AM
RE: The vengeance - by sadbhav - 06-05-2009, 09:54 AM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-05-2009, 03:56 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Ascor - 06-05-2009, 04:00 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-06-2009, 05:04 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-07-2009, 05:12 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-10-2009, 12:57 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-12-2009, 05:18 PM
RE: The vengeance - by The Lost Global Mod - 06-12-2009, 07:10 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Zabobula - 06-13-2009, 12:12 AM
RE: The vengeance - by Drahcir - 06-13-2009, 03:59 AM
RE: The vengeance - by 3rdEnemy - 06-13-2009, 11:56 AM
RE: The vengeance - by Lord Anu - 06-13-2009, 12:25 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-13-2009, 12:47 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Zabobula - 06-13-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Reaper - 06-13-2009, 05:11 PM
RE: The vengeance - by Zabobula - 06-13-2009, 07:48 PM



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