Well, its good, but you could add a bit more about how he changed or how he was before.( you don't have to do that).
Just one thing: Try to use " . ".
ok, I started a poll. Its left open until I return( monday), but if its obvious who will win, you can start it before.( Or I can do so if we already know on friday. Then my char will just follow one of you)
Btw: Are we going to use present or past tense?
Oh and are we starting in the town already? Otherwise everyone has to post once before we know where they are.( and we can't implement them in our posts)
@ES: Keep in mind that your character doesn't know everybody, so you don't know about their characteristics and backstory. But of course you will find out.
Edit: Oh it should be ES' in the poll. Wtf.
Just one thing: Try to use " . ".
ok, I started a poll. Its left open until I return( monday), but if its obvious who will win, you can start it before.( Or I can do so if we already know on friday. Then my char will just follow one of you)
Btw: Are we going to use present or past tense?
Oh and are we starting in the town already? Otherwise everyone has to post once before we know where they are.( and we can't implement them in our posts)
@ES: Keep in mind that your character doesn't know everybody, so you don't know about their characteristics and backstory. But of course you will find out.
Edit: Oh it should be ES' in the poll. Wtf.

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