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06-06-2010, 03:28 PM
The sprites seem excellent, although being a man of the gym and a love for muscle I spotted two flaws...
Looking at one of the legs it seems to be taken from 2 different angles and put into one.
The knee seems in a completely different direction to the foot on the characters right leg (our left). The foot would have to inevitably be dislocated to look like that. Also, for the foot to be like that the leg should turn to us slightly, producing a smaller inside calf and a larger part to the outside of the calf muscle (lower legs).
The easiest way to solve this problem is to make it look like the foot is turned outwards - that way the calf muscle is perfectly set and so is the knee.
The massive great kunai does not fit there. Look at how his hand is, if anything the kunai should be angled away from the character, not towards him. Should also be angled more so that the kunai goes into the page, rather than out of the page or to the side. I'd put the loop of the kunai infront of the hand also.
Other than that these are extremely good and promising sprites. Keep up the good work.
Looking at one of the legs it seems to be taken from 2 different angles and put into one.
The knee seems in a completely different direction to the foot on the characters right leg (our left). The foot would have to inevitably be dislocated to look like that. Also, for the foot to be like that the leg should turn to us slightly, producing a smaller inside calf and a larger part to the outside of the calf muscle (lower legs).
The easiest way to solve this problem is to make it look like the foot is turned outwards - that way the calf muscle is perfectly set and so is the knee.
The massive great kunai does not fit there. Look at how his hand is, if anything the kunai should be angled away from the character, not towards him. Should also be angled more so that the kunai goes into the page, rather than out of the page or to the side. I'd put the loop of the kunai infront of the hand also.
Other than that these are extremely good and promising sprites. Keep up the good work.
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