Hari's scribbles

[The Hari]

Thanks all for constructive comments.

@mundvoll: Oh yeah, I'm dont't so satisfied from her hair, but about face; I specially made it with that kind of expressions. At last she is BETRAYED angel - she losed sense of life, she doesn't see antyhing expect darkness (lol:P), for that reason she looks like mesmerized. But I like angels, so next time I'll draw happy angel

@HD and Marko: Experience? I don't think so. You're right - it's not my really first sprites. But first seriously sprites. I started spriting on the beginning of february (maybe at the end of january - never mind). I made just a couple poor works. I hate drawing by mouse, so after probably 2 weeks I ceased therof. From now on, until nowdays I made only one sprite. But recently I bought first tablet and now I can draw again. At the moment I showed all what I was drawing. So all in all I made 15 sprites. This is all my "experience"

Oh, and here you can see my old "awesomes" works:

Warning - epic sprites, they can be too awesome for you! (Click to View)

If we talking about proportions - it's truth, I don't know ANYTHING about it. Maybe I should read some in the website.

[Silverthorn]

Great work, really! From only these 2 sprites, one can already derive some sort of "style" from you (as in: see a new sprite, know it belongs to you). Really great work on both of them!

Two minor things that could be improved (other than the previous suggestions), imo, are the hair-shading (especially the left side should be, unless made clear otherwise, darker than the rest) and the skin-contrasts. Try to increase latter, so that it becomes easy to recognize in the big version and visible in the smaller one. But, again, these things are just minor, other than that, they're awesome. Keep it up!

[Gespenst]

If we talking about proportions - it's truth, I don't know ANYTHING about it. Maybe I should read some in the website.

actualy some people do not need to know proportions.
Its just tracing thats all, and thats why it was same to me at beggining.
You have some nice sprites
Hari- rep sprite, try to make ear bit smaller and arms thicker. Contrast between colors on skin.
Delia - Betrayed angel.Contrast between colors on skin.Hair falling is not natural. Eye sight is not natural too.

[The Hari]

Another work, at this time I worked on 158x158 size. This size is actually better than former which I used. I didn't have any good idea for scythe, so it can look poorly. So tell me, what do you think, is this size is better, what about proportions (maybe head is too big - again:P) and here is my work:
Grace - Teenage death

Original size (Click to View)

[Marko pro]

Another great sprite!!
Some critics form me:
-i think that shlouder is to "strong" for a girll!
-right foot its little to big.
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This time you improve hair style shading,exelent,clothes shade is still good,
and for face(really cleverly from you to cover it)i cant say anythings!!!
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For head,I dont know,to me looks fine!!!

[Bla bla bla 44]

Really cool . As Marko pointed out the right foot is a little bigger. Other than that perfect! You have really cool ideas for this sprites. Keep it up!

[Shane]

Pretty much what Bla bla bla 44 said.

[Gad]

A looot of potential.
Great designing ability.
Try studying human proportions to make your sprites better, since that's the main part of the problem.

[The Hari]

Sure, I know that I should read a looot about proportions (and I'll do this). But notice one thing in this foot, she standing sideways and right foot is some hide behind left foot.

[Gad]

The positioning of other parts (like her hips) say something different .
I'm especially complaining about size of head compared to the rest.