[sprite] Tiser

[XLittlebob252]

this is Tiser my first character:
whats better the first 1 or the second 1?

or

plz rate

here are movies of walking and standing of Tiser:
walking
standing

[JossuaDC]

Some things you should work on (in my opinion):
-New/edited weapon.
-Edit the 'extra' hair to improve it a little (e.g. add the original shading of LouisEX' hair) and 'attach' it to the already existing hair. I might upload an example if you need one.
-There are some 'dirty' pixels on the pants. Clean them up.

I really, really like the idea of a LouisEX with long hair though
I can't say it's good yet (hey, I'm honest and trying to help you ), but it's got potential.

[XLittlebob252]

-Edit the 'extra' hair to improve it a little (e.g. add the original shading of LouisEX' hair) and 'attach' it to the already existing hair. I might upload an example if you need one.

plz show me an exmpale.

and ill clean the pixles

[JossuaDC]

Hey, you've already edited it!
Lol xD

I was talking of a new 'top' for the weapon (I'll show it in the example), not changing it to a dagger ;p
You've already cleaned up some of the spots on the pants, so good job there.
And what you've done to the hair is small, but it has a big effect.

This is just my opinion, but different people have different opinions!
Look at what others say, but only change something if you feel good about it yourself too

I'll try to get the example up in an hour or two (might not make it in time - I'm busy :/ ).

Edit: I love your design for the dagger though :o (please tell me it's a dagger before I make a complete fool of myself xD)

[XLittlebob252]

uptaded ^^

Edit: its dagger dont worry.

[JossuaDC]

What are the blue stripes? ;p

[XLittlebob252]

you know some thing cool for the shirt so it wont look dry.

beacuase only red is boring.

[Lauli]

He should hold the dagger... "Cooler"
Like Deep holding his sword.

[Simoneon]

ok... more and more newcomers doing sprites.. that good

i like idea (wich i think is louisEX with dagger), but you should add something more specific like strange boot or a cap (i can't tell right now- no ideas..sry).

but 4 a newman- 7.5/10

[XLittlebob252]

what do you meen by cap?

and should i make of this sprite a character?