[Sprite] Electer

[JossuaDC]

Looking good.
I like how you used one of the weapons as shoulder pads, very creative!
Some suggestions:
Make him a bit 'looser', more 'active'.
e.g. Charging.
Just standing there... With some flashy lights surrounding him...
e.g. Sonic Blast.
He raises his hand... Just his hand...

And make him more orientated towards the right.
e.g. His right (from our perspective) shoulder pad is the same size as his left shoulder pad.

The moves don't look original so far, but you can still change them anyway.

Good job.

[Warg]

Thanks looks like it needs more work then i thought :P I'll update the first page with changes if you're interested

[KaywonnJuto]

...Do you have the chance to upload some gifs to see your char's animations?

He ment making a .gif
you know...it's not really dc work by the way? (idk where u got the idea for that)
ummm...it looks good so far - for a noob erm...Newcomer
Howja make the cape like that (to me doesn't really look LF2 style kinda shiney too...but who really cares... :P)
Did u ever try making any original features for him...
it's better if there was something original - besides the clothing...
...otherwise it would be just skinned....
keep working on it - I want to see what happens to it...
Is it just a sprite or char??? :confused:

[Wiro]

i've saw those sprites like 2-3 years ago... and the angle of the body
is still wrong...

but keep it up

[JossuaDC]

...Do you have the chance to upload some gifs to see your char's animations?

He ment making a .gif
you know...it's not really dc work by the way? (idk where u got the idea for that)
ummm...it looks good so far - for a noob erm...Newcomer
Howja make the cape like that (to me doesn't really look LF2 style kinda shiney too...but who really cares... :P)
Did u ever try making any original features for him...
it's better if there was something original - besides the clothing...
...otherwise it would be just skinned....
keep working on it - I want to see what happens to it...
Is it just a sprite or char??? :confused:

Newb = Newcomer. Treat them well and they might (eventually) become a helpful member of the community (and maybe even a vet!).
Noob = (Annoying) person who sucks at something or spreads false information (ignorance, 'cause they'd be trolls if they'd do it on purpose) and refuse to acknowledge to his/her flaws and accept any kind of help.

Don't get 'em mixed up (a lot of noobs do).

Lulz, internets.

[KaywonnJuto]

@ JossuaDC
Srry - never thought of that - but makes sence
ty JossuaDC
@Warg
Srry Warg I think i have been too harsh...i think i'm the real noob here

[Hypermodder]

:P

Char looks nice, but he looks so.....unbothered.....
While doing this moves he should use both hands. The face doesnt change also.
He rises his arm waay to easiely! He may spend some more power into the moves, huh?^^

Rest looks nice. Like the c&p for the robe!

[JossuaDC]

...
Char looks nice, but he looks so.....unbothered.....
While doing this moves he should use both hands. The face doesnt change also.
He rises his arm waay to easiely! He may spend some more power into the moves, huh?^^
...

Ha! Someone agrees with me ;P

[Warg]

Haha yeah I agree, thanks for the c&c

[JossuaDC]

Haha yeah I agree, thanks for the c&c

This is one of the first forums on which I see constructive criticism being supported and appreciated xD
Hey, it's all for the character, right?

I like the looks of Electer and that idea of using the existing weapons as shoulder pads is simply brilliant. Simple, but clever.