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The Secrets of the shadow Battles.
#61
yup exactly what i mean thanks phil! :)

EDIT: working on the new story,
so far i always check this topic for new chapters
and you know what? I'm a fan of you...jk just that you're a great author!!
But not the best in the world, Like they say "Wherever you walk, you're still walking on Earth"
Hi there! I like writing stories, and playing lf2 mods.
This is the current stories I'm working on.

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#62
I'm a bit confused...
Who is the boy?
And sometimes I lost myself in dialogs between characters, and I don't know who is talking to who...
I read the whole story and I like it, but some of your chapters are to small. Your story had a good base(I like fantasy stories), but I don't like that you made a king Razen so cruel. Good kings shouldn't be like that, I like the picture of good king like: Oh look at him! He is so strong and honest! With his white knights, generals and army he can defeat any evil!
A good kings take care of their men...
That's what I wanted to say, Story is really good and I like it
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#63
Last chapter was a month ago...
seems like i lost many fans :P
Anway since the last chapter i haven't even thought about the story...
let's see what i can do...
just give me a date when you want it to be released

Edit: @ above
i hate this image that every king has to be good...
Even the best can breakup...
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#64
please post the chapter soon, i really can't wait (^_^)
Hi there! I like writing stories, and playing lf2 mods.
This is the current stories I'm working on.

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#65
If king Razen must be cruel(or bad) then who is the main bad guy? Or there is more Protagonists in this story?
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#66
There are many protagonist
everyone is mainly the protagonist...
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