Phil's mading spriteness

[The Hari]

Too round shapes and too much brighter color of shading makes him look fat. You could leave more darker areas.
What I'm trying to say:
Face disturbing me the most, eyes are too small and distance between them is too wide.

[The Lost Global Mod]

better?

edit: oh hari you ninja!

[Marko]

The lower part legs looks weird. those dark line, i've never saw something like that, you might fix that..
and the thing which exg8 pointed out

[Gespenst]

The lower part legs looks weird. those dark line, i've never saw something like that, you might fix that..

I think its style of those pants

[Marko]

but it looks like bad try of doing musacles in tight pants. :P

[The Lost Global Mod]

to the pants part: i don't know what rid me on that day when i mad them this way, so no idea
to the eye part: well both eyes are partially getting hid by the hair which hangs over, i actually drew the eyes over the hair and then erased the part where the hair strands go over. So i don't know.

is the overall contrast still lacking?
also i will try to apply hari's suggestion.

[The Lost Global Mod]

something something different.

[8obis]

Some more movement would be really nice. Breathing, leg movement or what not.

[Gespenst]

It looks wrong.
Try do this in your real life. You will know what iam talking

[The Lost Global Mod]

i present t' ye, firen's disciple!