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Deadly past (remake)
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Well, very nice, some tension, but it sometimes has useless sentences, like 'It came from a bonfire'. I'm sure that's very nice, but....
One thing I find funny about this is the villain. 'Evil laughter'. Too cheesy for me, and I love cheese. The main char's a bit messed up, though.
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