05-27-2008, 10:48 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-27-2008, 10:50 AM by LF2Counter.)
I watch many people making a char......So i made this....Pls don't Laugh...
Comment plss...
Comment plss...
New comer And First Char
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05-27-2008, 10:48 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-27-2008, 10:50 AM by LF2Counter.)
I watch many people making a char......So i made this....Pls don't Laugh...
Comment plss...
05-27-2008, 12:16 PM
not bad but I think he is a bit too thin.
05-27-2008, 02:32 PM
Dragonxl Wrote:not bad but I think he is a bit too thin. Yea
05-27-2008, 03:08 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-27-2008, 03:08 PM by Hypermodder.)
<review>
5 start points-- (5/10) hmm, there are some black shadows under the right (if you were him; left) arm. (-1) The hair looks unclearly..(-1).the body does, too!(-1) The t-shirt light-properties are weird, bad hued,(-1) the color isn't very nice... (-1) (5x-1= -5) so much to the bad points! Now the god ones: The trouser looks clear,(+1) light properties are right ,(+1) and I like the color!,(+1) This counts also for the shoes!,(+1) The hairs in front of the face are looking good (reminds meh on Werewolf, a char made by DarkZorro),(+1) (5x+1= +5) __________________ result: 5/10-5+5= 5/10 good score for the first char...^^ </review>
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05-27-2008, 03:16 PM
Hair is the same as davis hair... It only looks unclear because it is on a white background.
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05-27-2008, 09:56 PM
agree with the posters above, he has some weird proportions and the bg-color is a bit irritating. Also, I wouldn't call that a "first char", you know, there are still the complete spritesheets to do and the data... just to be picky :P
elsewise, pretty good for doing it the first time
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05-28-2008, 12:51 AM
BluePhoenix Wrote:agree with the posters above, he has some weird proportions and the bg-color is a bit irritating. Also, I wouldn't call that a "first char", you know, there are still the complete spritesheets to do and the data... just to be picky :P Ok.I Understand now... |
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