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[char] Devid
#51
(04-07-2010, 04:02 AM)Taniaetc Wrote:  The lord of critics suddenly appears!
Let's see...
Readme and description - 5/10
I'm giving you this because;
-Some grammar errors, I'll fix them and upload it later, if you want?
-Rather weird instructions, make it clearer please
-More description on char moves
-Did you credit Aquarelos for the sprites?~I haven't uploaded the version with his sprites
Idea - 8/10
Pretty creative one. No other words to describe my feelings about this except: "Original".
Sprite - 7/10
Despite the sprite's "just-a-recolor", you made your effort in spriting and...
Your edited sprites make me laugh! Also in the D>A ones his right hand (in our view) stretches too much >.>~how? took it from original D>A
Data - 8/10
Your highest point... The char hasn't got flaws, incorrect centerx/y etc. And oh, I like it.
Gameplay - 7/10
I like the combo, but if the char's only got one, that's no fun.~nah it depend on how you use him, and he's supposed to be a preview for the mod, and he has 2 combos(aaad or just aaaaaa), depends on number of opponents actually.
Overall - 7/10
Nice char actually. All you need is more improvement in readme and sprites.
~Taniaetc
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#52
About your phoenix palm, it doesn't really stretch out too much, but the only odd things are....the fingers. If there are fingers in LF2, I've never noticed them cos they're too discreet. Change it into a palm or something. And your readme is slightly odd, a newbie probably couldn't understand it. Why did you put the davis id line there as well??

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BUT I AM THE GOD OF CRITICS!! BWAHAHAH!!
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@oliveryungo: No ME! Even Simon lol'ed.
@Topic: The Uppercut (for me) goes up too high... make it a bit lower. Looks overpowered.
K, @Simon: I'm really sorry. I don't know about that... until this moment.
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(04-07-2010, 09:26 AM)Taniaetc Wrote:  @oliveryungo: No ME! Even Simon lol'ed.
@Topic: The Uppercut (for me) goes up too high... make it a bit lower. Looks overpowered.

the uppercut HAS to be high for the combo to work, or it would fail miserably. and looking overpowered? try fighting ranged opponents. he isn't versatile.
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@Taniaetc: your point being? Do not doubt the master. For it is none other than the GOD OF CRITICS (and verbal warfare) THAT ADDRESSES A HEATHEN LIKE YOU!!! BWAHAHA!!
@topic: Why wouldn't the combo work? I don't see why not. Though i suppose making higher looks better, or else it would just be a flurry of fists and no one could see what was happening.
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FINALLY! completed. i removed the clone attack, which was originally for distracting enemies, but now after playing around with him, realised it makes him overpowered.
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put him in realeases. i'll report myself. yea
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So u followed Alblaka's char-ad style ;)
Anyways is there a new attack(s) for the char?
Just asking...
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nope. i found it's already complete, 4 attacks per char seems a good limit :D.
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the hair on his henry palm copy looks pretty cool, might even test this one...
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