Ragor's sprites

[Ragor]

Well, I've been bothered by the fact that Thundaro looked terrible. SOOO, I've been making new sprites for him, which are basicly recolours. This is open to critisism and helpful tips to improve.

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[LutiChris]

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Honestly this is realy BS IMO...
its barely better than the original. I don't see why you hafta put this into a separate thread than the other....
i can tell, but i think the older had more work into it, even though this one is cleaner, better, sigh idk the word for it....u didn't even attempt to change Firzen...(besides the cover-up and cut outs)
IMO it's a fail....
sorry for harsh critisism....

if u want to get better, look @ tuts, and actually try...like rly it's practice and not just tedious copy and paste pics...
since im not rly familiar with ur work, what program do u use?

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so now its our fault we dont like your character?
acttuly its your fault first you got to learn to sprite better.
second dont be lazy on the character.
so dont blame anyone.

ya, kinda true too.....[sarcasim]i can really tell how you worked sooo hard[/sarcasim] :P
seriously my advise for you is to try and look @ tuts, and also switch to either GIMP or PhotoShop...

ignore the harsh critisim....i realized i have been too harsh...
Ways to improve on:
1) If you want this to be ur own, either draw right over bat, so it's not noticeable or free-hand it
2) look @ tuts, since there is not much else i could explain....but test around with colors, u want to start off with dark before using light

V @lf2tim
lol thts what i thought, but i just said none... :P

[Ragor]

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Honestly this is realy BS IMO...
its barely better than the original. I don't see why you hafta put this into a separate thread than the other....
i can tell, but i think the older had more work into it, even though this one is cleaner, better, sigh idk the word for it....u didn't even attempt to change Firzen...(besides the cover-up and cut outs)
IMO it's a fail....
sorry for harsh critisism....

if u want to get better, look @ tuts, and actually try...like rly it's practice and not just tedious copy and paste pics...
since im not rly familiar with ur work, what program do u use?

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so now its our fault we dont like your character?
acttuly its your fault first you got to learn to sprite better.
second dont be lazy on the character.
so dont blame anyone.

ya, kinda true too.....[sarcasim]i can really tell how you worked sooo hard[/sarcasim] :P
seriously my advise for you is to try and look @ tuts, and also switch to either GIMP or PhotoShop...

ignore the harsh critisim....i realized i have been too harsh...
Ways to improve on:
1) If you want this to be ur own, either draw right over bat, so it's not noticeable or free-hand it
2) look @ tuts, since there is not much else i could explain....but test around with colors, u want to start off with dark before using light

V @lf2tim
lol thts what i thought, but i just said none... :P

Can't I just and new sprites?

[Ragor]

Meeps... Would this be considered gravedigging? Anyway, I made a new sprite... Don't expect anyone to like it... It's just Bat... again

[chase123]

it's not that bad actually i like the hair!but it needs more changes so that it doesn't look exactly like the same char!

[Ragor]

Actually, I just wanted to test out the hair cut

[Ragor]

So I haven't really sprited on my new laptop, but I had time to make this one sprite, which is basically A blue deep with a scythe. Little changes have been added, like another arm showing and the hair. His name is Kyle.

[Nathan]

thats better than me waaaaaaaaa
no seriously if you think i'm not right then look at my sprites they stink
but i think you might have put toio much back hair for him ^_^

[PsychoPixels]

Just add more shading on the hair, pretty decent.

[Ragor]

@PsychoPixels: The reason for the no-shading is that Deep has no shading in his hair anyways.