The LF2 Story!

[XxBlackOps888xX]

Once upon a time

This little fighter that had so much power that he ruled the
World his name was Jullian the ultimate fighter of all time! After that he said to woody let's go and kick some butt woody said okay! They went to fight the bandits but the bandits were to powerful so Jullian unleash his ultimate power
then they went back to there palace then they invite all there friends! They live happly ever after!!

Please vote Yes or No thanks!

[Alectric]

What?
you cant end there! the story was just starting to get good! Im serious!
Surely Woody and julian can go kick some more butt somewhere! There are plenty of bandit-infested places!
Woody didnt get much of a fight, you should do another chapter.

Also, i wonder why Julian fought the bandits? I thought they were on his side?
Please write another chapter

[Marshall]

the lol value here is immeasurable.

Silverthorn edited this post 01-11-2011 05:45 AM because:

Which is why i want more ~ Alectric MOAR!

[fire power]

But before you write more might I suggest you read oliveryungo's story the LFE Chronicles and see if you can get some ideas and stuff
but good prologue though
(If that was the prologue)

[oliveryungo]

That wasn't the prologue, fire power, that was the entire "story".
This is both horrifically bad and somewhat funny in its badness...lol

@V shouldn't it be like
"and they happily lived ever after NO THEY DIDNT they got their heads cut off and were cremated by evil demons who live in bedrooms. sweet dreams!"

[Alblaka]

That wasn't the prologue, fire power, that was the entire "story".
This is both horrifically bad and somewhat funny in its badness...lol

It sounds like this kind of storys you tell your childs if they're supposed to sleep, begging you tell them a gn8-story whereas you're pissed off and want to sleep...

Like "There was once a guy, he rescued someone and they lived happy after THE END AND NO GTFO AND SLEEP!"

Reaper edited this post 01-11-2011 02:04 PM because:

Or like: "There was this little child who didn't want to sleep. It annoyed it's parents until they just couldn't cope anymore, got a sharp knife and... you can imagine the rest." What? You can't sleep? Why is that, my dear?

[Bamboori]

kinda reminds me of this:

so woody fights against julius and wins right?
woody takes julius throne and power and money and buy himself giant ice cream factory =D=D
but woody tried to lick the ice and fell in the cooler after which his long hair (ice cream factory took long time to build) turned blue
so woody thinks like blue hair = evil so he sells ice cream factory and uses the moneys to buy arm-weapon thing and shiny blue power glove that shoots ice becuase that matches his hair

was this your inspiration?

[Divisor]

Oh f*** yea, greatest masterpiece I have ever read (and I read a lot of books, you know).

You definitely have my thanks and please continue, the Royal Society of English Writers is extremely impressed.

[Evil Sonidow]

I cannot POSSIBLY understand WHY you haven't been given the Warwick Price of Writing.

[Drahcir]

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Ma...sq3mffp09i