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Evil empire of Julian
#11
I think I agree with divisor, you need to improve your story. It's might be confusing if you spell wrong AND don't have a good content.
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#12
Guys I am just 9

I suck at writing stories. In fact it is all chapter 1 part 1 and part 2.

Thanks for some help guys by telling me what to do.

Regards,
Kushagra
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(05-07-2011, 05:48 AM)kushagrajaink Wrote:  In fact it is all chapter 1 part 1 and part 2.

Well,you need to write this is the top of your post,so we can know it.
Example:
first post:
Chapter I (tittle if you want) (part 1)

second post:

Chapter I (tittle if you want) (part 2) ;or just (part 2)
(05-06-2011, 04:39 PM)Reaper Wrote:  
(05-06-2011, 03:39 PM)empirefantasy Wrote:  Reaper may become annoyed from this very poor thread in story section.
Why would I? I'm happy about everyone trying his hand at writing. Besides, I've seen a lot of people in here who have continously improved their writing. o master has fallen from heaven :P

I was just joking:D
(05-06-2011, 04:50 PM)Simoneon Wrote:  
(05-06-2011, 03:39 PM)empirefantasy Wrote:  Before posting a story,you need to be good in English and to write longer chapters.
Your chapters are too short,in fact they are pharagraphs.Try to write longer.

http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=6183
Was your first story very good? Oh, it obviously wasn't!

I said just to write longer.Isn't that an advice ?!
Yes,my first post wasn't very good.:O
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