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[char] TheFox (first char) - TheFox - 11-15-2008
This is my first char: TheFox.
Comments please.
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - TheNave - 11-15-2008
sprite looks... okay... could be better though, only 2 shading colours and a reallyreally simple shadingway, good for a first char^^
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - Guigs - 11-15-2008
he's too... flat... don't know, also his hair doesn't have that common spikes.
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - Hukko - 11-15-2008
Hmm... Good for first sprite.
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - sadbhav - 11-16-2008
Try making his legs a bit longer, try shading his hair a little more & also make them a little spikey facing...forwards? BTW, pretty cool for a first sprite. Guess people have natural skill, eh?
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - TheFox - 11-16-2008
Ok.
Thank you for your comments.
I changed little shading and hair.
And he is taller now.
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - Guigs - 11-16-2008
way better, but you should look the tutorials of the forum, to improve even more. Cause it's not ready to be worked, need some improve yet.
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - snorsorbet - 11-16-2008
You are using PhotoFiltre, aren't you?
The pants in the first one is actually better, but the hair is waay better in the second one.
EDIT: Yes,you are right sadbhav.
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - sadbhav - 11-17-2008
And...what Snor meant about the pants was....The shading in the first one was better. You do better to reshade the 2nd one keeping the lenght same (am I right?)
RE: [char] TheFox (first char) - TheFox - 11-17-2008
I changed the shading like the one before.
Now it looks as following.
(And what did you mean Guigs with:"you should look the tutorials of the forum, to improve even more. Cause it's not ready to be worked, need some improve yet." ?)
I don´t know what i have to improve.
P.S. You´re right snorsorbet. I´m using photo filtre.
EDIT: Thank you snorsorbet. Now i understand.