[char] TheFox (first char)

[TheFox]

This is my first char: TheFox.

Comments please.

[TheNave]

sprite looks... okay... could be better though, only 2 shading colours and a reallyreally simple shadingway, good for a first char^^

[Guigs]

he's too... flat... don't know, also his hair doesn't have that common spikes.

[Hukko]

Hmm... Good for first sprite.

[sadbhav]

Try making his legs a bit longer, try shading his hair a little more & also make them a little spikey facing...forwards? BTW, pretty cool for a first sprite. Guess people have natural skill, eh?

[TheFox]

Ok.
Thank you for your comments.

I changed little shading and hair.
And he is taller now.

[Guigs]

way better, but you should look the tutorials of the forum, to improve even more. Cause it's not ready to be worked, need some improve yet.

[snorsorbet]

You are using PhotoFiltre, aren't you?

The pants in the first one is actually better, but the hair is waay better in the second one.

EDIT: Yes,you are right sadbhav.

[sadbhav]

And...what Snor meant about the pants was....The shading in the first one was better. You do better to reshade the 2nd one keeping the lenght same (am I right?)

[TheFox]

I changed the shading like the one before.

Now it looks as following.



(And what did you mean Guigs with:"you should look the tutorials of the forum, to improve even more. Cause it's not ready to be worked, need some improve yet." ?)

I don´t know what i have to improve.


P.S. You´re right snorsorbet. I´m using photo filtre.

EDIT: Thank you snorsorbet. Now i understand.