Posts: 4,878
Threads: 162
Joined: Mar 2008
wow, six files for a character? Cna't you compress this to three or two? from the screenies, you should be able to compress every attack into one single file...
secondly, the sprites aren't really appealing to me... they're simply a desaturated Dennis. And I HATE people saying they can't sprite. It's usually just another expression for "I don't want to take some time to do something creative". Instead, they're just re-colorizing or desaturating the original chars. Nothing more to add here...
Thirdly, there are a crapload of original lf2-attacks. That's kinda boring....
Finally, the hell move isn't really good looking. I almost assume that you got a 100x100-image from Google and increased the dimensions to 600². Too much black stuff at the border and pixel edges. Also... hell moves have to a) fit to the character executing it and b) look good. You might call your char "Demonic Demon" but even a newbie can see that this is Dennis. And he doesn't really look demonic. Therefore, you should color his eyes red and give him more fire-attacks. Ice doesn't fit a demon.
That's it for now.
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
~ Breaking LFE since 2008 ~
"Freeze, you're under vrest!" - Mark, probably.
» Gallery | » Sprites | » DeviantArt
Posts: 891
Threads: 16
Joined: Mar 2008
@ first line: You can try making something more flashy, like a rain of energy skulls coming down near to Demonic Demon (skulls with more evil appearance, and not as big).
@ second line: Yes, it is made by Gad. (Look in the credits next time). My tip is (that is how I started to sprite): Shut up and paint! There is one way and that is the hard way! You could also try downloading a spriting program from the website. PhotoFiltre should be able to get you started. Read tutorials, I know that there are some good tutorials here made by Dome that works for PhotoFiltre.
I did this to you for obvious reasons. You have just wasted a lot of time. Congratulations.
Still with the same joke? ;D - Simoneon
TITLE: a idea
make cave for bear?
Thanks given by:
Posts: 228
Threads: 16
Joined: Mar 2008
Some suggestions i can have:
1.Change the sprite. If you're not a good spriter, than copy and paste is ok ( and i think i wrote a tut on a vietnamese forum)
2.New moves: I don't know, just more creative moves.
3.The skull is a bit... scary. Try finding a side-faced skull (i mean, the skull looks like it's coming out of the screen and ... )
and btw, @lf2-hacker, please, don't misspell my name ^^
Thanks given by: