my first sprite :D

[JossuaDC]

it should look like this:

Just a little tip: make it clear that it's your opinion which you give to help him and not a fact.
People prefer the 'gentle' approach over the 'head-on' and direct approach.
e.g. My mistake in the Grey Henry thread.

Ontopic: I agree with Blue_Phoenix; the colours are basically too bright.
For example: imagine yourself wearing the shirt of LouisEX.
It's not too spectacular, but it's ok, right?

Now imagine yourself wearing a bright, duotone, blue overall with an orange cape strapped to your shoulders...

You get the point