Jordan's new sig

[Jordan]

Tell me about it, if its okay.

[Alblaka]

Mind renaming the thread to something like "Jordans try" or something? "My try" is quite a casual title ^^

Looks quite fine, i just dunno about this green-ish lining below his neck. And the white line below the entire face pic.

Nice font for the name, btw.

[MnM]

hey that sig is quite nice and the font is cool why wont u try to add more graphics??? its just simple not to say that it is totally simple go to DA(www.deviantart.com) and type signature tutorials u will get lots of tuts and nice improvements. probably u use photoshop?? anyways try using C4D's (Cinema 4 Dimensional) good luck.

[Wiro]

Well, it's kinda (very) plain, just nothing to look at
-no actual bg
-the main pic is blurry, it doesn't blend in the pic and it's placed too much on the side
-the text is too big, and it doesn't fit with the color scheme
-colors doens't fit together
those were the most important ones

ye and just some comments

Nice font for the name, btw.

the font is cool

totally disagree, the font is "cool" as it is but it doesn't really fit at all

why wont u try to add more graphics??? its just simple not to say that it is totally simple go to DA(www.deviantart.com) and type signature tutorials u will get lots of tuts and nice improvements.

I wouldn't suggest deviantart, it's kinda messy, google them...

probably u use photoshop??

most likely not...

anyways try using C4D's (Cinema 4 Dimensional) good luck.

... you could explain that a bit better, no let me -> google <-
and then type c4d or abstract render or sth

[MnM]

lol google is goool but DA is specially for art so DA is best i prefer.

[Jordan]

Well, it's kinda (very) plain, just nothing to look at
-no actual bg
-the main pic is blurry, it doesn't blend in the pic and it's placed too much on the side
-the text is too big, and it doesn't fit with the color scheme
-colors doens't fit together
those were the most important ones

ye and just some comments

Nice font for the name, btw.

the font is cool

totally disagree, the font is "cool" as it is but it doesn't really fit at all

why wont u try to add more graphics??? its just simple not to say that it is totally simple go to DA(www.deviantart.com) and type signature tutorials u will get lots of tuts and nice improvements.

I wouldn't suggest deviantart, it's kinda messy, google them...

probably u use photoshop??

most likely not...

anyways try using C4D's (Cinema 4 Dimensional) good luck.

... you could explain that a bit better, no let me -> google <-
and then type c4d or abstract render or sth

Thanks for the tips! New pic:

[Dj-BooB]

the new pic is alot better but the main render doesn't blend with the bg. and try to use more c4d's like wiro suggested