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03-22-2011, 10:11 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-22-2011, 10:12 AM by Alectric.)
It looks like a 'cheat sheet' like you make for math tests. And as such, i cannot make heads nor tails of it.
Your hand writing is pretty crammed in and rough, and there are too many boxes and strange shapes.
Just a suggestion:
Make it either computer generated, or not at all really. It would help with organising the information into a logical order.
We've got so much DC things, and it is pretty easy to pick up, and there are already heaps of tutorials and references and examples.
If anything, this is just confusing rather than helpful in my eyes.
But hey, if other people disagree with me, you dont need to please everyone :P
Also, the word 'tutorial' is not what i'd use for this. Probably 'reference sheet'.
Sorry if you take these words personally, im just trying to give some feedback is all.
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I know that it is very messy,but it is the first version,I will make some other versions.I did it last night in 10 minutes(02.00 am).
Why I use these boxes and did not wrote so much?
I needed a lot of time to understand how this system work.Sometimes I got tired from reading so much,(especially when it is wrote in computer).
So I thought to use images,so it will be more easy to understand.
Here,I have not explained,how to use datachange,I have explain how the total system work.
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I believe you have achieved, ahem, nothing. (I'm trying too hard not to be so harsh here)
Your notes are cramped, almost impossible to understand and completely non-linear. There is no straight path to try to read it, plus it has no explain. You haven't provided any images, what you have provided is a picture of your mental map of how you think the system works, which granted may not work for all people (I wonder myself if it works for you).
My advice on how to build such thing would be take actual screenshots and make boxes with clear explanations on what each thing means.