Veiled Chains ~ Discussion

[Evil Sonidow]

Story's out. Comments HERE.

[SirFrog]

Good start, Sonidow! I like the idea about the music, and i have yet not discovered a single spelling error!

Edit: quick reply XD

[Silverthorn]

woa, awesome! Love the music idea and the story itself, of course. Great work, keep it up!


_{little spelling mistake, as far as I know it's "concrete"}

[Evil Sonidow]

Fixed that. (It's just a letter.)

[Zabobula]

Very, very good. It's a unique way of approaching storytelling using the music n all. A good selection too. An Epic Pass! XD Keep up the good work.

[Azriel]

definitely the best start.



Azriel~

[Evil Sonidow]

Just wanna let you know that I've been extremely busy the past week and that's the cause behind no new chapters. That might be fixed soon though.

[Guigs]

I was really interested to know why the chapters weren't coming.
I'm not a big fan of 'from the future' stories, but i liked yours

[Zabobula]

Take your time man, no rush here.

[The Lost Global Mod]

I really would like to see you continue this story.
there is everything there what a story needs.. depth, right punctation, an interesting contenct and an good writing style
PLEASE CONTINUE