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Rudolf and the Machenist
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This is a random story about a LF char.
Rudolf

There was one mechanist in LF world named Redok. He was a genius but no one respected him. So he made an army of clockwork knights. He made an attack on Julian castle way before any of Little Fighters like Rudolf, Deep, Davis, and Woddy ware alive. Julian and Firzen had to fight the army and they won. The machinist ran away for years. Then he had a plan to kill Julian and all Little Fighters by making them go to his trap, but Rudolf will have to fight his new army and save all the Little Fighters but in the end something wrong will happen.

Rudolf was just walking in Lion Forest. He was bored so he just threw his shuriken at trees for no reason. He stopped walking because he heard a loud scream and an explosion. So Rudolf started running towards the noise. When he came close to the place he heard the noise he stopped and looked but suddenly there was another explosion under him that send him flying 10 feet above ground. Rudolf was in so much pain that each time he breathed it felt like his body was burning in fire.

Rudolf woke up but he still could move a mussel so he just thought what caused that explosion. Later after 2 hours Rudolf saw a person, he was bold wearing green goggles and an black smith cloth. He said something but Rudolf could hear him because the explosion made him dull in hearing.

Later Rudolf could only see bright lights also he could move and he was much better now, the only problem was that he was hungry and thirsty. He got to his feet and walked a little. Then he noticed that he was in another place a different than where he was exploded. He found a lake and got a drink of water and remembered he had food in his small bag but there was only two peaces of cooked meat so he took a bite out of two of them and saw the same guy digging in dirt and saying " Soon I will kill all of Little Fighters and Julian and become the ruler of the land." Rudolf had no clue what he was talking about but then he remembered that the LF tournament will be Lion Forest. Later he saw ten giant metal headless people (Metal Golems), they had bright golden armor that made them really tough . One of the metal golems said " The ninja had escaped. " in a rough voice. Rudolf wandered what type of prison did they locked him in but then the mechanic starred to talk again " Or maybe he never left that far and now I know why because I see him over the lake." Rudolf stared to run but then he saw a metal golem in front of him.

Okay that the end of my story so if you liked it and what me to continue tell me on the reply but I guise that it will be bad and lots of people will say not to continue.
I edit it Phil happy. rolleyes
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coolest guy ever Wrote:Some hints for rising writers:
  • Write down what your story is about, you don't have to be excact just some keywords ( you don't will get lost)
  • Write your story in an text programm like word or similar
  • Before posting, check your spelling, nothing is more embarrasing than a stupid mistake :D
  • Take comments serious, even if they hurt you sometimes , they will help you improve
  • No master has fallen from the heaven.. not even in case of writing. its practice (you will get alot better if you write alot)

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you're so mean ~Ramond
you're mean for editing phil's post. oops ~ Blue Phoenix
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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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