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[goldangel]

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I love LF2

[8obis]

Spectacular, just spectacular...

...

But seriously, Let me point out a few minor flaws in your sprite.
First of all the sprite itself doesn't have any shading besides the base that was obviously made by Alec.

Second, the face reminds me of either a sad puppy begging for food or this...


Also the concept of this sprite is pretty basic and you know a lot of people don't like basic. A t-shirt and jeans meh that has gotten pretty boring over the years.

Here's a tip. You should take a look at our tutorial section. My personal favourites from there:
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/thread-4959.html - PF's "how to detail your sprite"
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/thread-7197.html - PF's "tips on 200% spriting method"
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/thread-5084.html - Eddie's "Character Base Making Tutorial"
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/thread-6481.html - Monolith's "how to make good hair with gimp"
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/thread-7332.html - Monolith's "Tut for making sprite from 0%-100%"

HAVE FUN!

[chonkasaurusbotato]

But seriously, Let me point out a few minor flaws in your sprite.
First of all the sprite itself doesn't have any shading besides the base that was obviously made by Alec.

Second, the face reminds me of either a sad puppy begging for food or this...


Also the concept of this sprite is pretty basic and you know a lot of people don't like basic. A t-shirt and jeans meh that has gotten pretty boring over the years.

RtXas, Calm down. Can't you see that person is a newcomer? By the looks of the sprite you can tell that he has only started playing LF2. I know there are major flaws but keep your cool. That is a first try.

Gold, Not bad for a newcomer, you could try adding a darker colour on the left to make it look like it has shading.



Cheers,
Kushagra

[8obis]

I actually didn't even critize, it was more of a few friendly tips to improve his spriting.

In easier words:
-Concept of the sprite.
-Making the face more realistic.
-Shading.

[goldangel]

But seriously, Let me point out a few minor flaws in your sprite.
First of all the sprite itself doesn't have any shading besides the base that was obviously made by Alec.

Second, the face reminds me of either a sad puppy begging for food or this...


Also the concept of this sprite is pretty basic and you know a lot of people don't like basic. A t-shirt and jeans meh that has gotten pretty boring over the years.

RtXas, Calm down. Can't you see that person is a newcomer? By the looks of the sprite you can tell that he has only started playing LF2. I know there are major flaws but keep your cool. That is a first try.

Gold, Not bad for a newcomer, you could try adding a darker colour on the left to make it look like it has shading.



Cheers,
Kushagra

Thanks Kushagra and RtXas, I am still in a learning phase and appreciate your encouragement.