Representative char (Cole)

[chase123]

ok here is new breathing:



P.S i know the animation is wrong but still.

[Angel_Adam]

great,i've concentrate and its well done..
i see the tut worked..

[chase123]

okay after much time i thought that "this sprite wasn't shaded correctly"so i began again after much minutes i made this:



how is it?

[Silverthorn]

I compiled a small list which shows a few things that you could improve

a) there are some dirty pixels between shirt and pants, mainly (but also shoulders)
b) hair could be a little more spiky
c) you forgot the highlighting color at the shirt
d) the character's left arm should be moved a little more into the background; right now it's too much out in front of everything - the body should cover bits of the arm
e) take some lf2-char's shoes as a reference; nobody will notice but the proportions will look better

[chase123]

and now:

[XLittlebob252]

cool but somethings to complain:
1.hes a little fat.
2.legs are weird.
3.the hands are too short.
and thats it.

[Silverthorn]

Okay, looks like I gotta show you visually what I meant. I know, my sprite sucks but it's doing its job...

[XLittlebob252]

BP much better but i got somethings to complain:
1.i cant see the right eye (from our view).
2.hes a little too thin.
3.and hes hands are short.
but that its awesome.
and the hair is amazing!