[Rep char] [REDACTED]

[Kezeal]

This is the character I edited... It was an edit, but it still got me hours and hours to make for some reason :/
He's mostly an edit of Woody, but many attacks are from other characters. Sprites seen are ALL changed
Now the pictures:

Face (Click to View)

Sheets (Click to View)

Screenshots (Click to View)

Shield (Click to View)

Teleports away and then teleports back with a shield(like a normal teleport, just in one place and then a shield appears)

Blastpush (Click to View)

No comments...

Bat attack (Click to View)

[REDACTED] goes around and then 3 bats appear

Bug (Click to View)

If you press jump too late, the bats appear in the air and you jump in the air also

Skull attack (Click to View)

That attack does almost no damage, so it's pretty pointless, but I just can't decide what attack to put in place of that...

Comments and criticism please
EDIT2: And ideas too I'd like to add him more attacks that would fit under category tiger, any ideas?
EDIT: Dogtags removed from the sheets and btw this is my first character, Divisore was right
EDIT3: Changed the readme's part 4 because of the copyright...

[Divisor]

Well, the char is ok (even if it's all basic DC/sprites).
The sprites could use a little bit cleaning - quite a lot of dirty pixels now.

Anyway, not a bad start, and I wish you will only improve in the future
(Maybe I'll add some things when I test it for real, this were the comments on what I see now).

[Kezeal]

I don't see any dirty pixels except the dogtags... I removed them in sheet 1&2, forgot to remove in 0 :S
Any other dirty pixels?*goes to remove the dogtags*

[David]

http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=4245
First look what Blue Phoenix edited and now
look at the eyes, they are the same.
At the
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=4245

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You just copied them.

[Elias]

Well, the char is ok (even if it's all basic DC/sprites).
The sprites could use a little bit cleaning - quite a lot of dirty pixels now.

That's is true, its simple char well its just C&P char wich are annoying some times and there are pixel that are dirty by meaning of it they don't blur they stick out and say 'hey look at me I should be here' you might use blur on gimp. If you are a beginner in making char try to make them original okay and stuff like that next time, btw I won't comment cause not a lot of people like C&P char, just to tell you.

[8obis]

http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=4245
First look what Blue Phoenix edited and now
look at the eyes, they are the same.
At the
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=4245

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You just copied them.

Dude he made that face pic for him..

~RtXaS~

[Eddie]

http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=4245
First look what Blue Phoenix edited and now
look at the eyes, they are the same.
At the
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=4245

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You just copied them.

Blue made them for him? Hence - 'HELP WITH FACE' was it's name? You need to read...

Speaking of copying, I await your own sprites that seem to be funny, rather than copy and pasted positions. Otherwise it calls for the spam of the word COPY on your work...


Back on subject -
Keep up the work Kenert, hopefully it'll be completely finished in the near future... even if I normally don't like C+P characters. Have fun! (by nearly finished, you want to add more moves so I'm not considering it finished)

[Madara Uchiha]

For my tiger attacks, I suggest doing something were the character goes into a crouching position, were you use some special effects which is something like him charging, then you make him jump forward quickly, then he hits the opponent then lands on the ground, then if you press jump again he does it the other way, and you can do this many times by clicking jump. I would suggest the combination key would be D>J

Or you could do something, which I got the idea from dragon ballz, were the character stands in a stance with his hands crossed like a tiger which is about to strike, then he quickly swings his hands rapidly, summoning special effects which are like claw effects which hit the opponent rapidly. If you want me to find a video just ask.

[Taniaetc]

@Kenert: You should post a lot smaller screenshots (which focuses on the char, we don't care about the bg). Big images can make them un-enjoyable for people with lower-end computers.
@Topic: Okay, about the tiger move suggestion, the char dashes to enemies and grab them. The rest is yours.
Anyway, nice char, though the dc and sprite is just basic.
-You should fix the face, too blurry on the clothes.
-There are still some dirty pixels, recoloring it or cleaning it might be a great idea.
Keep up your good work. And try to improve on it.
~Taniaetc