xmfcx' Sprites

[mfc]

Here is one(the firstest ever):

(i have problems with uploading images via my mobile:P)

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Any kind of hardcore critics?

[ossiee]

good sprite, i dont even know how to do a girls hair
but her face is to small

[XLittlebob252]

nice sprite
good to see you started to take interest
i think for your first sprites you should use bases and sprite over them and slowly try to use less base but for start always use base.
it helps very much.

[Marko pro]

Great sprites...
I really like it

[mfc]

@XLittlebob252: i'm checking out the base sprites while spriting but spriting over them disturbs me, no problem, I'm trying to handle without them...

@ossiee: yea, face is a lil small...

[Monolith]

@XLittlebob252: i'm checking out the base sprites while spriting but spriting over them disturbs me, no problem, I'm trying to handle without them...

Xlittlebob252 meant sprite on some little fighter sprite,not look at it while spriting,right?

[Monolith]

Ok, let's go:

1. Weird position and not lf-styled base:
• Drawing good lf2-proportioned sprites is almost impossible, if you don't study remaking already existing bases. Your sprite is too thin and facing towards us (while original characters are looking little to the side).

2. Overblurred:
• Your shading style is messy. You should create strong contrasts while making shadows.

3. Unnatural hair
• Haven't seen hair like that in my life.

4. Unnatural falds on her skirt
• Try to observe, how do they really look:

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5. EYES! Totally weird.

easy,easy,don't be so hard on him,he just newbie at spriting world.
there is noone who can do great work when they done that first or few times.
About LF2 proportions,i know you wroted almost impossible,but its possible to me.
He just trying to do sprites not to fit in style.
@xmcfx,Welcome to spriters world.
As newbie good sprite,try not to over-blur your sprites in future,i know,u want to do your best,when i was newbie,i was over-bluring my sprites
about folds,noone can make good drawing or sprites with perfect folds when they just starting.
Good job xmfcx.

[mfc]

Thanx for critics(:
for this sprite; it's not made to be lf2 styled.. Just a crappy very first sprite:P

working with pixels just mads me out.. I suck at draving eyes in this scale...
here is v2:

[Monolith]

Now better.
Why wont you sign up in photobucket,imageshack or other image hosting site?

[ossiee]

good a lot better then the first one, like it
and try to make one based on lf2 sprite