02-20-2015, 03:14 PM
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02-20-2015, 04:12 PM
Does it have parallax?
02-20-2015, 04:34 PM
Looks beautiful! The name suggests it's a moon surface you're fighting on, so I assume you're on one of 2 (or more) moons. I suggest you put some glowing dots representing stars because the BG now feels overly empty. The ground looks like it's made of clay also, which makes it not feel like a moon. Perhaps, you can add a level of grey to the whole ground a little bit.
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02-20-2015, 05:05 PM
make walking area separate from the rest of the bg
02-20-2015, 05:45 PM
You can Also keep Some distance between that main land and Hills.Also you can Edit the hills and remake them. Give a Nice Shade and Outlines of the hills and you can also Draw some Objects in the Bg. Don't mind but the bg is looking so Empty.
Anyways The grounds are perfect. hmmm.....one moon is ok.Just add some little white stars★. It will look cool. And the Far hills Is Too bright. the moon Is back oh those hills so.... Far distance Hills hmm... Omg! ok no problem that all.
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02-20-2015, 09:41 PM
idea is great, i must say i like it and thats why i want u to push it more.
![]() although i do like it, some technical stuff kinda disturb me when i look at it. usually on landscape,(scientifically) the more the object is far from the viewer, the lighter it gets. in night scenes it should act the same, but it kinda hard to make that look right. especially if u choose the sky color as black. (i suppose ur gonna change that though) anyway, i think the not so true to science way would work better here, so far objects would be darker. just to show u what i meant, i took the pic u posted and did some small values and colors adjustment, (also placed some picture instead of the black sky) ![]() compression- ![]() also check the values, aint it feel more fluid? ![]() in ur edition, your main focal point is the moon, leading out-side the play area with the farest mountains. for my small edit, you get the main focal point as the moon for the subject(i suppose it is the subject). and the second one the ground for the gameplay area. i hope u wont get it too harass, im here to help. ^_^ if u got anything u wanna ask feel free. ![]() |
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