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Character: Earth
#31
Lol at the upper punch. It's almost look like he's flipping. You should add the middle finger.

Joke aside, I think you should let him use his rock arm to attack and extend the upper cut a little.

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#32
similarity? Wrote:[Image: 1283449756.gif]
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i can see you lazy
-done the basic sprite ( i know , it's hard )
-boring? make some effect sprite ( fast , and it's make you happy )
-after that ( done basic and eff ) , you can sprite the skill sprite
why?
your thread will be HOT when you post some Skill
if you make the skill first => lazy sprite , and when it's done , you must draw the basic sprite
you will think " this is not cool like the skill , boring , so i will fix my skill "\

i think so !!




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#33
ok thanks dude
i done the face pic
what do you think? D:
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#34
Looking quite nice. I'd add a soft gradient to the hair to make it appear not so flat (and maybe make the lines more curvy) and give the rocks on his shoulder a bit sharper edges. Rest is looking pretty fine to me.

btw, is the missing "h" in your sig-pic intended? :P
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#35
(09-07-2010, 09:41 PM)Blue Phoenix Wrote:  Looking quite nice. I'd add a soft gradient to the hair to make it appear not so flat (and maybe make the lines more curvy) and give the rocks on his shoulder a bit sharper edges. Rest is looking pretty fine to me.

btw, is the missing "h" in your sig-pic intended? :P

OMG thanks man i've forgotten my H XD
thanks thanks thanks thanks
wow thanks
and ok i try to do this more then appear

edit:
i make the better head ^^
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#36
In face pic his earth arm is at wrong side xp
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(09-08-2010, 08:53 AM)Whaat Wrote:  In face pic his earth arm is at wrong side xp

Doesn't matter that much, really. Just imagine the char always facing left :p
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#38
Or you could always do the simple - Flip Horizontal - if it bothers you that much.
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#39
That's a very nice face pic...there's really nothing to improve there, but some angle would be nice, not just straight on. It's already very good, so you really don't need to incorporate that if you don't want to.
The earth column thing- it doesn't look like...well, earth, because it's a series of small blobs. If you look at trickityhouses' char, the earth there is less blocky and more smooth, with layers.
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#40
The sprite are very nice indeed but your skills would look better if they are executed with the earth arm's contact with the ground. Though, that's just my opinion. Otherwise, nice work, dude.
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