Mine's Sprites

[oliveryungo]

The actual pose and clothes are pretty good. I just find his eyes a little bit off...I don't know why. Maybe because the eye color doesn't fit with his clothes? But good job, like the strip thingies.

[The Lost Global Mod]

like the strip thingies.

you mean porn?
you are amazing me how can you see some porn in this sprite. seriously.
i just see a weird scarf who is trying to fly away from the woodylike char who looks like a midget cause it isn't really visible that his knees are bend.
Also on the right arm (our right) someone grabbed his shirt but then the hand got missing.
with that i mean, that you overdid it with the folding right hand/arm is weirdly shaded, check that again.

[MnM]

actually oliver meant stripe not strip XD and yeah i find your words more difficult to understand.. could please elaborate?

[The Lost Global Mod]

well have a look at your char's knees or rather the feet. For me the knees are not visibly bent.
then you overdid it with the folding on the right arm. Which means you have too much dark lines for just this mini space there.
the right hand is not correctly shaded, the light just stop there and makes a round highlight.. there is no object blocking the way so it should go straight through the end of the hand.

[MnM]

k.. i made a new one XD



PS: if the pic is not clear let me know..

[Taniaetc]

-I like the muscles, they look MUCH better than my attempts to draw muscles at times.
-The hair looks fine, but you might need to add some more contrasting shadings.
-The shoes look a bit weird IMO.

[MnM]

Maybe Tania it did the muscle becoz i like building them up.. U know eddie and freeza do the same and they rock at muscle part .. i dunno about the others.. and whats weird about my shoe?

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aiights i thought those were my mistakes and i corrected it check it:



i thought hands are twisted so edited it.:

[oliveryungo]

Pretty good, except for a few things. The face looks a bit....stretched, and I think the left side of his face is too yellow. Muscles look good, but try to make them more....connected? I mean that it should be more smooth than a couple of shaded circles linked together.

[MnM]

Ok i thought that leaving some gap would exaggerate the feeling..

[oliveryungo]

But it looks odd if the test of his body, or even just his other ARM, can't match that supreme buffness.@ Phil- " strip " as in strips of cloth :P

V Now, now, if you didn't have a sick mind you wouldn't have jumped to that conclusion, eh? :P

The Lost Global Mod edited this post 11-06-2010 02:13 PM because:

i am pretty sure that your mind thought about "strips off cloths" instead. :P