[Char] Dome

[~Dome~]

I only work on this project after Arcanis, or if I´m bored of doing Arcanis.

I alyways wanted to do a char that represent me.
Like Havoc Creator, Matt, DarkZorro or Scorpion´s

Few days ago, I drew this out of boredum, and decided to make a char out of it.

The clothes are nearly the same, as I wear in real life, and he wears a sword, simply because I like them and once had a swordfight course.

The char should be the Brother of Kai.

• He is fast
  
• He is a bit weak, in relation to deep
  
• He can fight with, or without sword, without he attacks with wind.
  

Progress:

---Normal----Sword---






Critics would be nice.
I also need suggestions for wind attacks.

[SirFrog]

Nice one Dome!
I´m too making a representative char of myself, Sir Frog.

But yours look more LF2-styled.

[Hypermodder]

wow, he looks pretty cool!^^

*thumbs up*

His sword is kinda soft, sharpen it!

His clothes are looking Tom Cruse-like^^ (reminds meh on a guy walking aroun the beach!)

Only bad think are the shoes, theyre pixelated and not pretty good looking, even if i like the idea!

Another think I like is, that youre goin to give him wind-moves! They are rare!^^
Let me think- a wind-blow would be cool, a move like bats D>J, but with a itr/kind15 with zwidth 500 istead of punching would be cool!
You could also rip the wind-moves from advanced-lf2.
Another idea would be, to create a ball which has itr/kind10&11 instead of ithe normal itr!


Keep it up dude!

[Silverthorn]

Critics would be nice.
I also need suggestions for wind attacks.

There you go

• Let's start with the feet. I'm not sure, is he wearing sandals or is it the shading. Whatever it is, it looks weird...
  
• (for the people like me that are a bit more realistic :P) Actually, you can't pull out a thick/broad/big sword out of such a thin scabbard. Making it wider or the sword smaller would probably still look good, if not even better
  
• Look at his left arm. The perpective is kinda off. I mean, when you look at the character from that position, the arm should be more hidden. Moving it around one or two pixels to the left (behind the body) should solve that.
  
• nothing, I just wanted to have four points :P
  

Kayz, now that I finished my awesome 4-points-list of what I don't like, I'll also make a list of the things that I like, self-evidently 4 points

• The first 20 pixels.
  
• The next 20 pixels.
  
• The next 20 pixels.
  
• The last 20 pixels.
  

Or, everything :P

I also need suggestions for wind attacks.

Here you go:

• A tornado (preferrably a stronger attack)
  
• An up-wind that'll throw the character into the air
  
• hovering (?)
  
• A wind-block which will deflect any enemy's ball-attacks (is that actually possible? Dunno :P)
  
• A down-wind that'll push the enemies to the ground.
  
• A gust that'll blow dirt into the enemies' eyes so that they won't be able to act for a short time
  
• "Move as fast as the wind" to another place
  
• A sword-throw that'll pierce the enemy (therefore you lose your sword)
  
• A weather change
  

All for now
Hope you can do something with this

[Hypermodder]

Another idea:

If he summons his sword (i guess trought transforming!) you could make the sword golwing turquoise when he draws it and then it summons a wind-thingy....

Wind-color

[~Dome~]

• Let's start with the feet. I'm not sure, is he wearing sandals or is it the shading. Whatever it is, it looks weird...
  
• (for the people like me that are a bit more realistic :P) Actually, you can't pull out a thick/broad/big sword out of such a thin scabbard. Making it wider or the sword smaller would probably still look good, if not even better
  
• Look at his left arm. The perpective is kinda off. I mean, when you look at the character from that position, the arm should be more hidden. Moving it around one or two pixels to the left (behind the body) should solve that.
  
• nothing, I just wanted to have four points :P

Fixed:

• Fixed right (or was it left BP? ) arm
  
• Fixed shading on right leg
  
• Fixed shoes
  
• Fixed {thing were he wears his sword}
  

Suggestions I liked:

BP

• A tornado (preferrably a stronger attack)
  
• An up-wind that'll throw the character into the air
  
• A wind-block which will deflect any enemy's ball-attacks (is that actually possible? Dunno :P)
  
• A down-wind that'll push the enemies to the ground.
  
• "Move as fast as the wind" to another place

HM

• A wind-blow would be cool, a move like bats D>J, but with a itr/kind15 with zwidth 500 istead of punching.
  
• Create a ball which has itr/kind10&11 instead of ithe normal itr!

You could also rip the wind-moves from advanced-lf2.

I didn´t played A-LF2 for a while, could you please explain this attack?

i guess trought transforming!

correct.


Thanks you for the nice suggestions/comments!

[Zhyhm.Z]

Did you make the sprite on paint?
My opinion:
-The face look kinda...how can i say... weird, cuz i can see a white part on the face (is that the smiling? Or i have problems with my eyes?)
-You could edit the pants more. It doesn't really match the jacket
-The jacket should be longer than the shirt
-You could sharpen the sword more, and give it some more shading
And about the wind move:
-Jump high in the air, and push a huge tornado (kind of like henry's palm)

[~Dome~]

Yes he´s smiling.. I delete this in the spritesheet
I leave the jacket as it is./fits better imo.
I dunno what looks wrong in the pants, should I use a belt or sth?
The thing with the sword was already said/will be done.

Oh and no I used only Photofiltre.

[sadbhav]

He looks kinda you know droopy make him stand up a lilbit more & hands are a little thick, thin them a little

[~Dome~]

that looks only because his pants let him look like this, but compare it with another char, let´s say dennis: