Whaat's Sprites

[Whaat]

I was away for a day 'cuz i got banned D: now i will be very nice etc. to everyone so i won't get banned again :3 And i'm sorry for being rude ;<
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And i wondered how this guy:

Would look like as totally LF styled so i made this:

And i thought about making this as a char.
BUT the face (eyes and nose, maybe the size of the head) is soo messed up that i won´t make more of his pics until i have fixed it.
Critics needed for pic, cuz if i'm going to make this as a char, it's easier to fix things beforehand than afterhand.

[Sonic Boom]

I was away for a day 'cuz i got banned D: now i will be very nice etc. to everyone so i won't get banned again :3 And i'm sorry for being rude ;<
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And i wondered how this guy:

Would look like as totally LF styled so i made this:

And i thought about making this as a char.
BUT the face (eyes and nose, maybe the size of the head) is soo messed up that i won´t make more of his pics until i have fixed it.
Critics needed for pic, cuz if i'm going to make this as a char, it's easier to fix things beforehand than afterhand.

offtopic: Hey Who Banned You?
And How You Got That Ban Out Of Your Profile?
Just Asking.

[bashscrazy]

what you said about the face - i think its the details that are wrong like the eyes
and i think you should raise his belt up (maybe make it smaller - make put his legs a bit higher..
LF2 chars legs are still longer than their upper body (but not standard 3:2 - more like 6:5)

[Whaat]

Sonic Boom:
It wasn't permament ban, just one day ban so i would understand that i shouldn't continue being rude etc.
Bash:
Yeah, eyes are the biggest problem, and true, i should higher his belt :/ fixing.

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Changed the design a little:

Idk was the old hair better :/
I also thought about hiding the face somehow so i wouldn't have to sprite eyes and nose/mouth xp

[Bamboori]

jimmy newtron much? xD

if you want to hide the face, better do it via hair overhanging/shading. right now it looks like hes blind folded :P

[Whaat]

I could try overshading :/
But here is few more versions xp
New hair, mask
old styled hair, mask
Made quick funny version xp

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Overshaded:

Sunglasses xp :

[bashscrazy]

overshaded doesn't mean to make his face black lol! - im pretty sure it means to make a heavy shaded vertical gradientish
I like the old hair + mask and the sunglasses one best

[MnM]

there are no fists? Anyways, stick out his hands . Also sun glasses wouldn't solve ur problem either. I will also get difficult to draw 'em in different perspectives.. ( Just a pre-thought) . mask version is cool. I would love that.

[Whaat]

Bash: Okay xp i just tried same thing that is use in drawings, but i guess it doesn't look good in LF :/
Me'n'mine: Nope, his sleeves are so long that fists aren't visible. And yeah, with sunglasses i still would have to draw nose and mouth + sunglasses are kinda out of theme?
And i too like the oldhair+mask version best :3
Bamb: I just now understood what you meant by ''jimmy newtron much? xD'' it was that kid's series where that mainchar had samelike hair?

[Whaat]

Meh, tried to redesign:

Maaan i hate those stupid eyes and head D: maybe i should make char without head ;<
I hated that boring standing sprite so i made this (punch sprite, samelike as Henry's)

Now the guy is much bigger than in this one:

But bow is still little so it looks stupid D: i'm good only at making single sprites with my own (not LF) style, yhyy, sniis ;<